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Changes(Senryu)

First day, they courted, Next day,was an accident, Third day, they broke up.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/29/2010 6:56:00 AM
very interesting.... would make good for me right now..lol...p.d.
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Date: 11/1/2010 2:21:00 PM
That was a very short lived relationship. An wonderful write. Phyl
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Date: 11/1/2010 9:21:00 AM
Nice description on the lives of the lovers, very sad ending, charles
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