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Changement

Now that the days are cold and grey the hours that pass are boring you might say, the weeks are all the same at least the weekends could be saved by this greyness that surrondes us all. I see sad looks around but I can't say that mine is different though Finally I found a reason to bring a smile in this windy season: changement I guess this is all I can say so that now you have a hint to how bring a smile on your face don't let the surrendings make you become sad just find a way to get out of this quirky chain

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2016 10:22:00 AM

Margherita Russo, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2015 8:07:00 PM

Margherita, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 10/22/2014 5:13:00 AM

Changement. I like the phrase and the poem. And the message. Wonder why you are not posting poems now.

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 9/18/2013 10:08:00 AM

Whoa Margherita! Wise words these - and so beautifully penned. I like the thought of changing your own course when life becomes harsh. Very well penned.

Mario De Paz

Date: 5/18/2013 7:47:00 AM

I like the spirit of this poem suggesting changes to bring a smile. I notice a small refuse is "surrending" instead of "surrounding". You can fix it by editing

Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/28/2013 5:24:00 PM

nicely done Margherita, I wrote something like this when I was around 17. Happy Easter and spring ;}

Carol Eastman

Date: 3/8/2013 7:31:00 AM

Great poem but you definately need a little winter pick me up. Try my 'Oh No, Oh No' for a little Easter Bunney fun... My poems are crazy... silly... Perfect for a winter day.

Carol Eastman

Date: 3/8/2013 7:23:00 AM

A tremendously Great write! Welcome to PoetrySoup. I write HaHa Story Poems to make you laugh... Try a few. Jack Ellison my friend is into happy limerick fun to brighten your day. Com visit. You can find us somewhere way down the top 100 community list... Your firend... And definately keep writting.

John Loving Iii

Date: 3/7/2013 5:10:00 PM

sean recomended you to me. and your poem was the one i needed for today. i've been down lattley and your piece just reminds me that i have to lift myself up. thanks.

Sean L Sanders

Date: 3/7/2013 4:56:00 PM

Maggie check surrending I think you want surroundings. Very good poetry young poet

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/7/2013 4:53:00 PM

Within a soul exists a smile. Some wear a wry one, some really have style. In darkness is light to shine all around. Your poem gives advice that is so very sound. Have a nice day Margherita. Just to be a nit picker, you could check your spelling. :)

Sean L Sanders

Date: 3/7/2013 4:33:00 PM

Margherita! I'm a huge fan, I think your poetry is outstanding.

David Williams

Date: 3/3/2013 6:15:00 AM

Margherita this is a quirky piece of work that invites you in and then lifts your soul...I like it....David