Changement

Now that the days are cold and grey
the hours that pass are boring you might say,

the weeks are all the same
at least the weekends could be saved
by this greyness that surrondes us all.

I see sad looks around 
but I can't say that mine is different though 

Finally I found a reason
to bring a smile in this windy season:

changement

I guess this is all I can say
so that now you have a hint
to how bring a smile on your face

don't let the surrendings 
make you become sad
just find a way 
to get out of this quirky chain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/18/2016 10:22:00 AM
Margherita Russo, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/5/2015 8:07:00 PM
Margherita, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 10/22/2014 5:13:00 AM
Changement. I like the phrase and the poem. And the message. Wonder why you are not posting poems now.
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Date: 9/18/2013 10:08:00 AM
Whoa Margherita! Wise words these - and so beautifully penned. I like the thought of changing your own course when life becomes harsh. Very well penned.
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Date: 5/18/2013 7:47:00 AM
I like the spirit of this poem suggesting changes to bring a smile. I notice a small refuse is "surrending" instead of "surrounding". You can fix it by editing
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Date: 3/28/2013 5:24:00 PM
nicely done Margherita, I wrote something like this when I was around 17. Happy Easter and spring ;}
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Date: 3/8/2013 7:31:00 AM
Great poem but you definately need a little winter pick me up. Try my 'Oh No, Oh No' for a little Easter Bunney fun... My poems are crazy... silly... Perfect for a winter day.
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Date: 3/8/2013 7:23:00 AM
A tremendously Great write! Welcome to PoetrySoup. I write HaHa Story Poems to make you laugh... Try a few. Jack Ellison my friend is into happy limerick fun to brighten your day. Com visit. You can find us somewhere way down the top 100 community list... Your firend... And definately keep writting.
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Date: 3/7/2013 4:56:00 PM
Maggie check surrending I think you want surroundings. Very good poetry young poet
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Date: 3/7/2013 4:53:00 PM
Within a soul exists a smile. Some wear a wry one, some really have style. In darkness is light to shine all around. Your poem gives advice that is so very sound. Have a nice day Margherita. Just to be a nit picker, you could check your spelling. :)
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Date: 3/7/2013 4:33:00 PM
Margherita! I'm a huge fan, I think your poetry is outstanding.
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Date: 3/3/2013 6:15:00 AM
Margherita this is a quirky piece of work that invites you in and then lifts your soul...I like it....David
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