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Change of Seasons - Haiku

icicles 
crying a river of  tears
for winter has died

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Poet Destroyer A

December 25, 2011 at 10:43 PM

Elaine,,a wonderful haiku, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

February 5, 2011 at 4:00 PM

Interesting analogy and use of personification for a creative view. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Kash Poet

February 5, 2011 at 1:17 PM

Amazing !Enjoyed--kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

February 4, 2011 at 11:00 AM

wowie!!! THis is MY kind of Haiku!!! 7!

Skat A

February 3, 2011 at 9:27 PM

BEAUTIFUL ELAINE, LOVE IT~SKAT

Tahera Mannan

February 3, 2011 at 7:36 PM

This is just beautiful and a unique way to see the icicles.

James Fraser

February 3, 2011 at 11:05 AM

Nice one Elaine. With the icicles being the tears, it's like their self mourning....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

February 3, 2011 at 10:20 AM

What a great analogy, Lainie. You are so talented. Glad you are back sharing work with us again. Love, Carolyn

Jimmy Anderson

February 3, 2011 at 10:13 AM

Beautiful Haiku...Jimmy

Daver Austin

February 3, 2011 at 9:57 AM

Tell ya one thing - I won't cry when this winter is over. Had over a foot of snow yesterday. Good write - love those icicles dripping. LOve, Dave

Nette Onclaud

February 3, 2011 at 8:54 AM

enthralled by the flowing imagery of frost with this amazing write, elaine.. thanks for coming around with your cheers; much appreciated! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 3, 2011 at 6:28 AM

So happy u have returned my friend ..making u a favorite poet of mine today as u have been since the beginning luv...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 3, 2011 at 6:27 AM

Absolutely phenomenal Lainie.. more visual I have not read..full of imagery so intense.. great thoughts penned .. thankxx for sharing and for your special comments on my poetry too..luv..