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"change of Mood"

The clouds are fuller,
as the sky has changed its mood
to a cooler sigh..


For "summer is over" contest

seasonshaiku

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Wilma Neels

September 10, 2010 at 4:03 AM

Hi Mr. F, congratulations on your win with this excellent haiku, luv Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 9, 2010 at 11:19 AM

Congratulations Mike on your win in S K A T *S contest "Summer Is over". Love, Carol

James Fraser

September 2, 2010 at 11:21 AM

Michael, I so enjoyed this Haiku first time I read it. I'm so glad it was placed so high, I love it >> James

Francine Roberts

September 2, 2010 at 8:22 AM

wonderful , congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 2, 2010 at 4:11 AM

Congratulations on your win Michael in S K A T *s contest "Summer Is Over". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

September 1, 2010 at 9:36 PM

wow, here is a beauty I somehow missed seeing earlier. Luv, Andrea

Joyce Johnson

September 1, 2010 at 7:29 PM

Congratulations Michael on your big win. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 1, 2010 at 6:37 PM

Congratulations on the 2nd placement in the contest, Michael

Skat A

September 1, 2010 at 5:35 PM

Michael, SwEEt SwEEt!* Congratulations, and thanks for the wonderful entry. Had fun reading all the amazing Summer Haiku*luv~SKAT

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 1, 2010 at 5:02 PM

YEAH my White Knight .. congrats on your 2nd place in the Summer Haiku contest... awesome words ..enjoy sweetie..with luv.. check out the next contest and enter please..luv..

James Fraser

August 23, 2010 at 1:11 PM

Images of impending autumn in cascade flow, whether rain or wind. Lovely seasonal poetry Michael >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 13, 2010 at 9:36 AM

Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Michael and wish you the best in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

August 13, 2010 at 9:18 AM

Very nicely done, Michael. Unfortunately, the summers in the South drag on into November. Wishing you success in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Harry Horsman

August 13, 2010 at 5:52 AM

good luck with this wonderful Haiku. Harry

Wilma Neels

August 13, 2010 at 2:48 AM

Love your haiku for the contest Michael, always Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 12, 2010 at 8:59 PM

Wonderful expressions on summer is over, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 12, 2010 at 4:02 PM

A cooler sigh and a little cry from me as I have to wave bye to Summer.. W.K... a cool Haiku indeed Michael and good luck in Irma's new contest.. with luv..