Gregory Richard Barden Poet Senryu

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* Reworking of an older idea *

Change of Heart

~       I, an introvert...
          

                           found comfort being alone -


                 your love ... ruined that       ~






~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Senryu Contest" Poetry Contest, Mick Talbot, Sponsor.

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Susan Gentry August 6, 2018 at 4:49 PM Congratulations on your win. Who you are; who you are when they're with you. Thought-provoking and profound. :) Gregory Richard Barden August 6, 2018 at 5:36 PM Thank you so very much, Susan, I'm pleased that you enjoyed my poem! Blessings! :-) <3

Eve Roper August 5, 2018 at 2:32 PM Greg, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve Gregory Richard Barden August 6, 2018 at 5:34 PM Thank you so very much, Eve! :-) <3

Mark Toney August 4, 2018 at 2:56 PM Congratulations on your win, Gregory. Very thought-provoking, and the photo is awesome. Nicely done. Gregory Richard Barden August 6, 2018 at 5:34 PM Many kind thanks to you, Mark - thank you, my friend! :-)

Line Gauthier August 3, 2018 at 10:56 PM LOL. well penned, Gregory. Congrats on your winning poem. Gregory Richard Barden August 6, 2018 at 5:34 PM I'm pleased you liked it, Line - thank you! :-) <3

Andrea Dietrich August 3, 2018 at 3:13 PM LOVE this one. a top poem for me. Gregory Richard Barden August 6, 2018 at 5:33 PM Thanks, Andrea, I so appreciate it! :-) <3

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 3, 2018 at 1:06 PM Back with congrats <3 <3 <3 Gregory Richard Barden August 6, 2018 at 5:32 PM Thanks so much, Mo! :-) <3

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 31, 2018 at 9:56 PM Another brilliant Gem! I do love em brief and potent. <3 Gregory Richard Barden February 1, 2018 at 3:02 AM Thanks so much, Mo ... blessings, Dear Friend, (I owe you a soupie). :-) <3

Line Gauthier January 31, 2018 at 9:56 PM Found the one. Congrats on that and on your fine gem, Gregory! Gregory Richard Barden February 1, 2018 at 3:04 AM Thank you so much, Line ... I found TWO soul-mates in this life, but lost them both, and married two women who were NOT soul-mates, (lost them, too). Pretty lousy odds so far, but I haven't given up. ;-) <3 Blessings, Friend!

Connie Marcum Wong January 31, 2018 at 4:15 PM Brilliant Greg! I wonder how many feel this way! : ) Gregory Richard Barden February 1, 2018 at 3:01 AM Thank you, Connie ... quite a few, I imagine! :-) <3

Vijay Pandit January 31, 2018 at 3:24 PM Very clever! Gregory Richard Barden February 1, 2018 at 3:01 AM Thank you, Vijay! :-)