Change of Clothes

Long twisted  stretching tendrils
Dressed in green summer clothes
Skin hard wrinkled and furrowed
Turn to rustic burnished copper and golds
Shiver in Autumn
As the cold wind blows.





Peter Dome.copyright.2014.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Breidenthal Avatar
December 25, 2016 at 6:12 AM
Super cool poem here. Lots of spectacular imagery that makes the reader think. (: Good job. Thanks for sharing your work with us. Rated this a 7++
Dome Avatar
December 25, 2016 at 12:01 PM
Thank you so much. made my day. you're so kind. Take good care. My best wishes. Pete.
Manassian Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Lots of imagery here...I'm with Peter...you made us FEEL the elements. Great write.
Dome Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 9:07 AM
Thank you so much Eileen, it's such a pleasure to hear from you. So glad you enjoyed it take good care. Warm best wishes. Pete.
Andresen Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 8:20 AM
- Beautiful written, Peter .............. but, I do not wish autumn welcome yet ... - oxox // Anne-Lise :))
Dome Avatar
August 13, 2014 at 6:30 PM
Thank you kind lady. Glad you enjoyed it. I don't want autumn to come yet either. Take care, best wishes.Pete,
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