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I tried so hard to be your perfect child but in your eyes I turned out wild Yeah, sometimes I did lie but Mom, I really did try and I'm still trying to change to this day Trying to change my horrible ways ^ trying to be a better son trying to be a better brother but problems just flow like water My eyes are burning from the tears but now I will try if you do too 'cause Mommy, I'm trying to change for you. 1 poem on the theme of max of 25 lines Any form is acceptable. No names or identifying marks 09/23/2017 EARLY OCTOBER PREMIERE CONTEST any form,any theme,max of 25 lines 10/3/2017

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Date: 10/13/2017 5:14:00 AM
Blessings and heart-felt congratulations on your win, Don - wonderful work and well-earned, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/11/2017 9:07:00 PM
Don, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem in my contest!
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Date: 9/23/2017 2:26:00 PM
Don, it sounds like you really have put in a lot of effort to do what you can. There is no perfection, but this is inspiring to try to do well :)
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Don Bukana
Date: 9/27/2017 2:03:00 PM
Thanks so much dear. I really do appreciate and civility your kind comment.

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