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Voluptuous fall
frozen in its descending;
free flowing by spring.



     For Raul Moreno's "Icy Cascade" contest
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November 30, 2013 at 11:44 AM
Susan, ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Have fun and take care during the new seasons Holidays.. Always <3 =LINDA
Austin Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 5:57 AM
I like the movement in this one. Congrats on the selection. daver
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March 7, 2010 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations Sue, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann
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March 4, 2010 at 1:50 PM
oops, sorry I said hm, I just saw that he gave 15 places in this one!
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March 4, 2010 at 1:48 PM
HI, Susan and Congratulations on your HM. LUv, Andrea ps that was very original "voluptuous fall"
Freeman Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 10:00 AM
A nice place Sue. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
Owens Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 7:39 AM
Congratulations on your win...enjoyed..Marty
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March 3, 2010 at 9:48 PM
So very nice Haiku! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.
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March 3, 2010 at 5:22 PM
Hey there you are Sue! haven't seen you in a while. Congratulations on yoiur win with this voluptuous Haiku! Cool!
Haick Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 12:31 PM
My warm congratulations to you, Sue, on this wonderful Haiku taking a winning spot in the contest! Enjoy!
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 12:25 PM
Sue, Congratulations on being honored in the winner's circle with this lovely haiku. blessings, Connie
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March 3, 2010 at 11:34 AM
Sue, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James
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March 3, 2010 at 8:59 AM
Congratulations on your win. Lovely words. Love, Joyce
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March 3, 2010 at 5:45 AM
Congrats Sue on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a marvelous Haiku of description for the photo... enjoy this wonderful win... and thankxxx so very much for your special comments on my poetry and blog.. appreciate..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Brown Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 3:29 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Sue. Love,Carol
Moreno Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 1:45 AM
Sue, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul
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February 28, 2010 at 2:48 PM
Dear Sue, the picture is beautifully expressed in this traditional 5/7/5 syllables haiku. Good luck in the contest. Love, Iolanda
Austin Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 5:48 AM
A drop into the well, or a warming swim. I like it. Love, daver
Kelly Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 3:31 AM
You got the picture in words , Sue and best of luck in the contest ....
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February 27, 2010 at 7:54 PM
A wonderful description of the photo, Sue! Each season ushers in its own beauty. If an when spring ever arrives, the poets here will be writing about flowers again. Soup Mail returned! Love, Carolyn
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February 27, 2010 at 7:52 PM
Beautiful Haiku...enjoyed....good luck in the contest...Marty
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