William Kelii Kekaula Poet Sonnet

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Champing the Seasons - Ct

Champing The Seasons

A March spring rose like December,
pale shadows meet, by my shutter,
blues screech, that I brooded over,
... my gist be faint, cause a clutter.

As seasons shift their daily quest,
recurrent graduate the stressed,
the day soon proves to modify,
this challenge is met, up go I.

Like December, pale shadows meet,
by my shutter, a March spring rose, 
--that I brooded . . . over, my gist . . .,
be faint, cause a clutter, blues screech.

Capricious seasons my journey,
groove the best exact a tourney.

2020 September 28     
*2nd Place*
Charonnet
~~charles messina

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Mark Koplin October 14, 2020 at 12:14 PM Congrats on your win! William Kelii Kekaula October 14, 2020 at 12:22 PM Thank you, Mark, and to you as well, Aloha! William

Jan Allison October 13, 2020 at 9:33 AM Many congrats on your win William:-) hugs Jan xx William Kelii Kekaula October 13, 2020 at 10:01 AM Thanks, Jan, and my compliments on your 1st Place win too, Aloha! William

Charles Messina October 13, 2020 at 8:31 AM William, fine work of this difficult form my friend. Great poetry! Congratulations on your fine placement in my contest. I hope all is well. Best wishes...Charlie William Kelii Kekaula October 13, 2020 at 9:57 AM Thank you for the opportunity, Charles, all is well my friend, hope same be with you, Aloha! William

Linda Alice Fowler September 29, 2020 at 1:22 PM Lovely William. All best, Linda William Kelii Kekaula September 29, 2020 at 2:14 PM Hearty thanks all around, Linda, Aloha! William