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Champagne Rain

He plants black seed of love in me So deep it deposits destined dreams Waking white flowing river stream Of liquid love abandoned by the weak The weak ones who toyed with black gold Playing me a slot machine for the most Delaying cream climax and green growth Looting consuming that what I give most Peach palm rubs on his back Little kisses in his heart Love bites unites a candy snack Black lovers forever dark star I find peace in his pearly smile Runs so deep like majestic Nile Come to me lover when you can Meant for each other like promise land Walking by faith despite my fright That your forever kiss is just this tonight Leaving me to reminisce in teal time Missing your licks you missing mine I prayed for you and now you have come Why waste time on fear, you are the one Planting love seeds and warming like sun Calming purple seas of love you flow from I feel hazel hope in your kiss Sweet like cocoa but twice as thick I don’t red regret a thing we did Make it champagne rain again I insist.

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Date: 10/16/2023 10:40:00 AM
very cool imagery your title has. And all the poem is so lovely.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2023 11:08:00 AM
Aw thanks Andrea! hugs
Date: 10/15/2023 6:38:00 PM
I love the abandonment of cerebral thought in the rush to love, especially in the last stanza. Go for that champagne rain! Never a regret, and no rain checks! Super write, Karen. :) gw
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/15/2023 6:57:00 PM
Hugs and thanks Gershon!
Date: 10/14/2023 1:57:00 PM
a lovely title and your words of love were beautiful. I enjoyed this latest creation. Have a pleasant weekend, Sara
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/14/2023 2:00:00 PM
Sara thanks
Date: 10/14/2023 5:44:00 AM
A delightful journey through your words of love and romance. Enjoyed the amorous voice of your depicting heart's fire. Splendid write, Karen.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/14/2023 6:15:00 AM
Vijay thanks!
Date: 10/14/2023 4:26:00 AM
So sweet and romantic, Karen:)
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/14/2023 5:01:00 AM
Joanna thanks.
Date: 10/14/2023 1:08:00 AM
A very sensual poem and use of metaphors.. this one rhymes and flows so well... i hope it rains in champagne again for you...
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/14/2023 1:12:00 AM
Hugs Silent One. I will as a poet kiss and tell in a poem of course. lol Thanks for reading.
Date: 10/14/2023 12:53:00 AM
What an enchanting love poem you wrote, Karen. Filled my heart with love. O'll join you both with a glass of champagne. Blessings.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/14/2023 1:05:00 AM
Please do Victor! Glad you like it! Hugs blessings

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