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Champagne Rain

He plants black seed of love in me
So deep it deposits destined dreams
Waking white flowing river stream
Of liquid love abandoned by the weak

The weak ones who toyed with black gold
Playing me a slot machine for the most
Delaying cream climax and green growth
Looting consuming that what I give most

Peach palm rubs on his back
Little kisses in his heart
Love bites unites a candy snack
Black lovers forever dark star

I find peace in his pearly smile
Runs so deep like majestic Nile
Come to me lover when you can
Meant for each other like promise land

Walking by faith despite my fright
That your forever kiss is just this tonight
Leaving me to reminisce in teal time
Missing your licks you missing mine

I prayed for you and now you have come
Why waste time on fear, you are the one
Planting love seeds and warming like sun
Calming purple seas of love you flow from

I feel hazel hope in your kiss
Sweet like cocoa but twice as thick
I don’t red regret a thing we did
Make it champagne rain again I insist.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 10:40 AM
very cool imagery your title has. And all the poem is so lovely.
Jones Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 11:08 AM
Aw thanks Andrea! hugs
Wolf Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 6:38 PM
I love the abandonment of cerebral thought in the rush to love, especially in the last stanza. Go for that champagne rain! Never a regret, and no rain checks! Super write, Karen. :) gw
Jones Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 6:57 PM
Hugs and thanks Gershon!
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 5:44 AM
A delightful journey through your words of love and romance. Enjoyed the amorous voice of your depicting heart's fire. Splendid write, Karen.
Jones Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 6:15 AM
Vijay thanks!
Daniel Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 4:26 AM
So sweet and romantic, Karen:)
Jones Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 5:01 AM
Joanna thanks.
One Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 1:08 AM
A very sensual poem and use of metaphors.. this one rhymes and flows so well... i hope it rains in champagne again for you...
Jones Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 1:12 AM
Hugs Silent One. I will as a poet kiss and tell in a poem of course. lol Thanks for reading.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 12:53 AM
What an enchanting love poem you wrote, Karen. Filled my heart with love. O'll join you both with a glass of champagne. Blessings.
Jones Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 1:05 AM
Please do Victor! Glad you like it! Hugs blessings
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