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Chambers of Quicksand

how did i even get here
through what maze
or what enchantment

now caught in quicksand
surely to be swallowed whole

sinking to a certain death
yet still...

the words simply
will not rise
though they may be
my only salvation

my heart in my throat
up against its door
heavily bolted

no sound comes
no cry for help

as if suspended
in virtual animation

slowly sinking
down
down
to my death

must i drown
in this dreadful
sea of silence



AP: 1st place 2022, 2nd place 2022

Submitted on February 4, 2022 for contest A STRAND (1066) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST
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Goldsmith Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 12:37 PM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. In life there are so many different kinds of quicksand one can get into. A "sea of silence" is just one kind. Have a blessed day/weekend.............
Gauthier Avatar
February 6, 2022 at 9:25 AM
So very true, Paula. Thank you ~
Skelly Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 8:12 AM
Silence can be very oppressive, and the ability to speak has fled..Nice...Delice
Gauthier Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 11:05 AM
Thanks, Delice. Much appreciated ~
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