Chaiten Spew

From my window I see the most wondrous of sights
Mother natures wrath releasing her might
Blackened plumes of smoke in monstrous rise
Turning day into night as it covers her skies

Oranges and reds in sporadic bursts of colour
Oxygen sucked in as her atmospheres smothered
Electrical releases like skeletal veins
When you witness her power, is she going insane

Canopies of greens become consumed in her path
Pyroclastic flows in suffocate wrath
Where once you heard birds in chirping surround
Explosion's now aplenty in catastrophic abound

From my window I see the most wondrous of sights
Am I as insane as her as I marvel her delights
The settling down of the spewed innards of she
I look inside myself as her power thralls thee








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Date: 7/26/2011 1:45:00 PM
Might I be so bold as to say that I think this is about a volcanic eruption? I think it is, though-- very awesome way of depicting it, very vivid and so artfully expressed, loved that 2nd and 3rd stanzas-- way to go, James-- ok now I am looking up what "Chaiten" is... ;D
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Date: 7/26/2011 1:47:00 PM
Ahh. Now it is confirmed for me-- something new learned yet again today-- thank you for this one, sure turned out to be informative for me as well :D
Date: 7/26/2011 10:45:00 AM
I was just watching on the History channel about the Northern lights James, I'm not sure if this is what you are refering to, but, oh how well it does burst with the same energy ! I say you are truly blessed having the sites you portray in your writes dear poet ! Awesome write sir ! Later, james
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Date: 7/23/2011 11:40:00 PM
Sounds like a tornado or something similar. A powerful verse with such vivd images.
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