Chained

Winged, winking devils dance
on onyx tinted wings entice
burnt appendages so broken inside rib cage

Unable to fly out of this hell hole
a shadow lifted nevermore
a touch as cold as night lures steel cuts
knees buckle, locked down
nowhere to run from

Rusted chains tighten
each new link pierces,
digs deep the heart's flesh
not enough mercy to shred apart
desire kept it beating just
....this must be what love is
bound in arms
blinded souls cannot escape

Tormented visions
a dark cloud silhouette
spinning around the sun
ravished by chaos
an ancient evil curse arises
within shadows suffering
darkness inside embers burning
with hot pain buried inside ashes

Deeply rooted demonic forces spawn
an evil eye turns
evolving in bad deeds
capturing the innocence of the human
sacrifice
one beast of an unclean spirit
possessing love charms of a snake
coils with lust
putting a heart in chains
attacking with wickedness

Fallen angel filled up inside
hate and pride
cunningly from out of the ashes
remains a demonic lapdog
violating innocence

Soul of impurities
a shadow grows darker
in every love that is taken
unpure vessel when the eyes open
to the dawning light





A collaboration by Liam McDaid & Kelly Deschler
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ainsley Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 11:33 PM
Oh my, I really felt this!My Gothic heart whispered as I read your powerful work,"It takes one to know one."Safe passages always Kelly in the shadows of night and the thunderclouds at daybreak that would keep you from the light; Thalia.
Deschler Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 6:32 PM
Once again I must say thank you, Thalia, for reading my poems and leaving such nice comments :)
Nance Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 10:19 PM
Ooh this makes the darkness inside me tingle, I like my poetry with a tad bit of torment and a sparkling ounce of pain and affliction. Nicely done you two :)
Deschler Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 9:12 PM
Thank you, Casarah. Both Liam and I appreciate your comments on our poem... Writing can definitely heal you when you let your pains flow out into the words :)
Mac Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 11:23 PM
Nice!!! My kind of style I like to read. Arcane knowledge............ of evil. 7/7 Excellent Collab. Quincy
Deschler Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 1:22 PM
Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem, Quincy... I like to write in a darker style every now and then.
Onclaud Avatar
June 13, 2016 at 12:53 PM
powerful combo dear kelly and liam... congrats on your POTD win!..huggs
Deschler Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 1:04 PM
Thank you, Nette. It was an honor for us to have our poem chosen as the Poem of the Day!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 7:35 PM
Congratulations on having this great poem featured as POTD Kelly! #7 ; )
Deschler Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 1:00 PM
Thank you, Connie. It was an honor to write this poem with Liam and then to have it featured as the Poem of the Day. We appreciated that very much!
A  Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 10:42 PM
NICE.... Kelly, amazing Collaboration. SKAT
Deschler Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Thank you, Skat... Doing these collaborations really seems to bring out the best in me. I know its helping me to be a better writer and I grow a little more each time :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 8:20 AM
I see congrats are in order for POTD! Well done!
Deschler Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Thank you, Rick! Liam and I were honored to have our poem chosen as the Poem of the Day :)
Haight Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 8:08 PM
Hi, Kelly and Liam, congratulations to you both for your deep and dark collaboration being honored as Poem Of The Day. Well done! Hugs, Sandra
Deschler Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 1:55 PM
Hi Sandra, thank you so much for reading. Both Liam and I appreciate your nice comments. We were honored to have our poem chosen as the Poem of the Day!
Warrior Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 7:44 PM
Congrats on POTD...a great chained write...very dark and deep...^WW^
Deschler Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 1:51 PM
Thank you so much, WW... Both Liam and I appreciate your kind comments. We were honored to have our poem chosen as the Poem of the Day!
Mcdaid Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 5:50 PM
thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments wishing you all a blessing of a week
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 5:47 PM
You two make dark interesting. Well done.
Deschler Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 1:42 PM
Thank you so much for reading, Rick... Please forgive me for not replying sooner. I haven't been around much lately. Just needed to take a break from writing for awhile :)
Mcdaid Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 5:41 PM
your pen linked perfect in this chain kelly congratulations pal wishing you a blessing of a fay
Deschler Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Thank you, Liam. Congratulations to you, too!... Have a great week :)
Mcdaid Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 5:42 PM
day
Andresen Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 12:56 PM
- Deep and dark - Congratulations to you both, Kelly and Liam - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)
Deschler Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 1:02 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise... Liam and I are honored to have our poem featured as the Poem of the Day!...hugs :)
Devnath  Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 11:15 AM
Beautiful collaboration my lovely friends. Both geniuses have brought an excellent gem. Good luck on POTD. A great 7. Loved always, bl
Deschler Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 12:49 PM
Both Liam and I appreciate your kind words on our poem. Thank you, BL :)
Nance Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 7:28 AM
Ooh I just love your descriptions, very good! And very good grats for the two of you on poem of the day :)
Deschler Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 8:49 PM
Thank you so much, Casarah. Both Liam and I are honored that our poem was chosen as the Poem of the Day!
Allison Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 6:55 AM
what a wonderful collaboration Kelly and Liam many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Deschler Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 8:35 PM
Thank you, Jan! It is great to be writing again with Liam. We're honored to have our poem featured as the Poem of the Day!
Smith Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 6:48 AM
Congratulations on POTD honors, well done...
Deschler Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 8:25 PM
Thank you, Charlie. Liam and I are honored that our poem was chosen as the Poem of the Day!
Sathasivam Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 2:29 AM
An excellent collaboration. Well expressed. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it
Deschler Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 10:17 PM
Thank you, Ravi. We're glad that you enjoyed our collaboration!
Callus Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 11:24 AM
A wonderful dark love collaboration. You both express your deep feelings with powerful words. #7 ~ Regards // paul
Deschler Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 10:09 PM
Thank you, Paul. Both Liam and I appreciate your kind words on our collaboration... Its kind of fun to let my pen drift to the dark side once in awhile :)
Muideen Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 7:25 AM
Great and wonderful collaboration. Enjoy dropping by.........A.M.
Deschler Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 10:06 PM
Thanks for dropping by, A.M... Both Liam and I appreciate your kind words on our collaboration :)
Smith Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 7:08 PM
A wonderful collaboration Kelly and Liam...I do like the tone of this
Deschler Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 8:30 PM
Thank you for reading, Tim. I am glad you liked this. Both Liam and I appreciate your kind comments :)
Mcdaid Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 6:22 PM
Truly a pleasure writing this with you Kelly passing you a warm smile thank you kindly for joining pens I think it turned out excellent
Deschler Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 12:28 PM
You're very welcome my friend. Thank you for inspiring my pen and giving me another opportunity to write with you. Always a joy :)
Parker Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 5:31 PM
To relinquish one's soul to love is to chain it to the darkness..my first thought after reading this dark poem
Deschler Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 12:12 PM
Sadly yes, love can lead us down dark roads and sometimes we forget what love was meant to be... Thank you for reading, Frederic. Both Liam and I appreciate your comments :)
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