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Chain of Sorrows

Maybe darling, you have fallen down  
or got lost, sweetheart on the way home  
to find our path, would you rather die alone without  
rather than be stuck on this earth to someone like me
An overwhelming deep sadness inside mixed with pain  

Banished as stupid while questioning 
in my sanity I felt the ache  
I saw the demon sit at my table blocking me
Falling heavy laden I lay back crying alone  
totally heartbroken saved myself enough money  

Achieving one great goal heading east
You who brought the sunshine warm feelings
flooding back, in pure clear emotions, dreaming of you  
Love you were all my focus, in every gentle care  
Softly in tenderness finding things very hard cut  

Please understand, tears keep falling love  
everything I care about forever remains  
Truly beautiful, did you take the wrong road to me
whatever cost I was left to carry the burden 
Price tag of my past sins thrown on the fire to burn me

I forgive you as one wanted to  
spend the rest of his life with only  
You sweet baby complete, if it means, me going through  
Hell's fire to find our path, holding hands with peace within 
one a spirit chants freedom, thanks to you darling love  


An angel of mercy appears soft  
cloaked in the warm feathers, within light  
saving me in your arms, sweetheart wrapped 
up together, talked  love, you kissed me 
Soft for me, under the rainbow bridge  
A promise when we held each other,  you would marry me



syllables 9/9 cloud nine 13/13/13 lucky or unlucky whatever way ending 9/9/9/9/9 always this dream silver lines ending on 14 clasps the chain my birthdate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/15/2015 1:13:00 PM
A very painful poem Liam, but I like it a lot. Good write.
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:33:00 PM
Heartwrenching Liam.There s always sunshine after the rain.. Im moved by such poem.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/30/2014 12:18:00 PM
the truth how i see it through my eyes charmaine sure i have loads of beautiful dreams to write about always works for me thank you dear friend bless you
Date: 11/29/2014 9:24:00 AM
The poem rocked -- love pain, only for the brave at heart -- and you have a big brave heart!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/30/2014 12:13:00 PM
i just write it david how i see it through my eyes thank you dear friend for the deep heartfelt comment bless you pal
Date: 11/29/2014 6:36:00 AM
Such pain from the heart.... Your love will find you my friend.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/30/2014 12:07:00 PM
i will content myself in love that surrounds tim the easiest way live in my loving memories as hate plays no part in my life wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated bless you
Date: 11/29/2014 6:03:00 AM
I wish I could break this chain, Liam. If love is true...it will come back to you. Lovely poem....honesty shines through in every line. Keep your head up....
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/30/2014 11:41:00 AM
true love eileen never dies i do believe wonderful comment dear friend truly heartfelt deeply appreciated bless you
Date: 11/29/2014 5:47:00 AM
- It's like a abstinence not get the one you love with - You feel it, physically, throughout your body - how you are missing something essential ... how it gets you to breathe ... - what makes your feet to move .... not exist anymore .... an empty hole - Beautifully written my friend Liam! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/30/2014 11:12:00 AM
people like lose such a feeling i just do not understand them always sounds to me they are afraid so they strike with hate love is on the floor meek whiltst crushed in hates sacrifice thank you anne lise wonderful comment bless you dear friend

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