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cerulean loss

her alabaster lips did drown
the sea with rage that fateful dawn.
how beautiful with skin so pale,
her alabaster lips. did drown
the roar of waves and shredded sail.
Poseidon's wrath on human pawn.
her alabaster lips did drown.
the sea with rage that fateful dawn...

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/15/2013 12:39:00 PM

very good congrats on being featured lovely poem Shadow x smile

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/14/2013 7:09:00 PM

Hi Samuel, , CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**

Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/16/2013 7:27:00 AM

Thank you for noticing :D

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/10/2013 7:56:00 PM

Superb composition with impeccable rhythm. A belated congratulations :)

Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/11/2013 2:11:00 PM

Thanks! I like iambic ...ba-dum ba-dum ba-dum ba-dum...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2013 2:45:00 PM

Samuel, , congratulations!! awesome "Triolet" ... xox~ LINDA

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2013 12:36:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..It has great poetic qualities..Soup mail soon..Sara

SKAT A

Date: 8/24/2013 5:13:00 PM

Hi Samuel, a nice winning poem... congrats....SKAT

Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/11/2013 2:14:00 PM

Thanks SKAT!

Samuel Robinson

Date: 8/24/2013 1:41:00 PM

Thank you all for the great comments! and thanks to Giorgio for the challenge!!

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/23/2013 8:21:00 PM

very nice...congrats on your win :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/23/2013 6:15:00 PM

Nicely done, Samuel. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/23/2013 7:09:00 AM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

SKAT A

Date: 8/16/2013 10:48:00 PM

Samuel, , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *".

Rick Zablocki

Date: 8/16/2013 3:39:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poem. Welcome. Rick

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2013 3:19:00 PM

Hi Samuel, deep like the sea. Extreme passion against fate..enjoyed, -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/11/2013 2:13:00 PM

Thank you for the welcome!

Sunshine Smile

Date: 8/15/2013 11:21:00 AM

Welcome to P-Soup, Samuel ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

Samuel Robinson
Date: 9/11/2013 2:12:00 PM

Thanks for my first comment!