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Cerulean Loss

her alabaster lips did drown
the sea with rage that fateful dawn.
how beautiful with skin so pale,
her alabaster lips. did drown
the roar of waves and shredded sail.
Poseidon's wrath on human pawn.
her alabaster lips did drown.
the sea with rage that fateful dawn...

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Shadow Hamilton

September 15, 2013 at 12:39 PM

very good congrats on being featured lovely poem Shadow x smile

Poet Destroyer A

September 14, 2013 at 7:09 PM

Hi Samuel, , CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**

Samuel Robinson

September 16, 2013 at 7:27 AM

Thank you for noticing :D

Karen Anglesey

September 10, 2013 at 7:56 PM

Superb composition with impeccable rhythm. A belated congratulations :)

Samuel Robinson

September 11, 2013 at 2:11 PM

Thanks! I like iambic ...ba-dum ba-dum ba-dum ba-dum...

Poet Destroyer A

September 1, 2013 at 2:45 PM

Samuel, , congratulations!! awesome "Triolet" ... xox~ LINDA

Sara Kendrick

August 29, 2013 at 12:36 PM

Congrats on your winning work..It has great poetic qualities..Soup mail soon..Sara

Skat A

August 24, 2013 at 5:13 PM

Hi Samuel, a nice winning poem... congrats....SKAT

Samuel Robinson

September 11, 2013 at 2:14 PM

Thanks SKAT!

Samuel Robinson

August 24, 2013 at 1:41 PM

Thank you all for the great comments! and thanks to Giorgio for the challenge!!

Sandra Adams

August 23, 2013 at 8:21 PM

very nice...congrats on your win :)

Joyce Johnson

August 23, 2013 at 6:15 PM

Nicely done, Samuel. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi

August 23, 2013 at 7:09 AM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Skat A

August 16, 2013 at 10:48 PM

Samuel, , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *".

Poet Destroyer A

August 15, 2013 at 3:19 PM

Hi Samuel, deep like the sea. Extreme passion against fate..enjoyed, -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Samuel Robinson

September 11, 2013 at 2:13 PM

Thank you for the welcome!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 15, 2013 at 11:21 AM

Welcome to P-Soup, Samuel ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

Samuel Robinson

September 11, 2013 at 2:12 PM

Thanks for my first comment!

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