Centre of the Storm

how gloweth thine eye
in this sadness of sunlight…
where trees cease shaking
woodland rests with bated breath
wryly squirrels search for home

© Harry J Horsman 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Deo Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 10:44 PM
The eerie calm before the storm? If so, your words paint the picture with skill. Keep well, rest well, stay positive Sir Harry, Elder Poet. Shalom Shalom
Tor Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 9:44 PM
Such heartfelt expressions Harry I sense your words my friend...
Proxenos Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 1:23 PM
The eye of the storm, a brief reprieve, for fawn and flora, until this maddening storm continues its path! Excellent as always dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Gasun Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 7:15 AM
I love and enjoyed reading this one too my dear friend. A powerful storm indeed. Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you always. Hugs
Messina Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 1:02 PM
Run Toto, run. Auntie Em, Auntie Em! There's no place like home...even if it's in the center of the storm. Just take shelter (lol)
Rees Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 6:15 AM
Whatever comes next? Can’t bear to think. Yes, bated breath indeed ! You’ve conveyed the scenario so well.
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 4:57 PM
I really like this one, Harry and it's so good seeing you write poetry. Please keep it up! Thanks for your recent note to me on my poem.
Kendrick Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 4:01 AM
I enjoyed reading this one. That must have been one bad storm. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Maverick Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 11:05 PM
Wryly and even spryly; could your squirrels be? Maybe searching out.? A more bendy tree.? Although that eye, that does not see Conveys so much..To you; to me' The sqirrrel survival will retain Its mysteries..)
McBride  Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 7:51 PM
Love it my friend, what a great description and detail to put one in the center of the storm : )
Buehler Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 6:30 PM
A vivid and lovely depiction of the eye of the storm. Splendid writing!
Sangster - K Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 1:03 PM
Your center of the storm captured it all. Love it Harry! :-)
Woodrow Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 10:49 AM
very well described in this short form! took me back to cyclones and the feeling of dread knowing it is going to start up again after the brief calm in the eye :)
Poet Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 10:12 AM
I know what it's like to be in the center of a storm, and from what you're saying, Harry. Your final remark perfectly summarizes everything.
Pandit Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 5:55 AM
Your ending line says it all--aptly described, Harry. Keep safe and healthy!
Turner Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 5:30 AM
I've been in a few Harry. This pretty much describes it like it is. Hope you are feeling better.
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 1:41 AM
- As Mandy … I've experienced it …powerfully, Harry - hugs
M  Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 1:39 AM
Oh so lovely Harry so beautifully described! Hope you are feeling a lot better! Debx
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 12:50 AM
I have been in the center of a storm, Harry it was a small tornado and exactly as you describe. Very eerie indeed. xx
Cunningham Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 12:40 AM
For a short time there is a lull and then starts up again, must be terryfying to be caught up in it. Hope you're feeling better Harry. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 10:44 PM
Perfect imagery.
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