Central Village

Central Village, ah bitter-sweet your love
The golden sunset above
The black smoke of sugarcane burning
And the boy on Twickenham's mead yearning
Sometimes again like flocks of birds in flight
Across the evening sky
Memory comes winging at the edge of night
And old men only sigh
For all life treasures seem in the past, gone
And every new dawn
Is empty, but of the world's weariness. My pearl,
My diamond in the rough was she
The troubled, bright eye, beautiful girl
I did not know joy she brought to me
Despite your violent lanes, broken fences
You showed me life without gilt and pretenses

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/23/2014 10:19:00 PM
Good write, David, your explanation helped. Merry Christmas
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Date: 9/9/2010 3:33:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for your deep and intense reading of my poems. I love your scholarly critique. You are right about many things, Jew is a person, a special person. Central Village is a ghetto inner-city community of St Catherine, Jamaica. The metaphors are eclectic ... Biblical themes lens through Greek mythology, African folklore, and childhood stories ... pulling in the human historic condition into one reality of mankind . Thanks
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Date: 9/8/2010 6:31:00 PM
ok, here is Central Village again! I never heard of Twickenham. A mead does not sound like a place on an island and yet the sugarcane seems to me like somewhere warm and tropical. I really like this poem here. Sounds like the pearl was a woman then? Same as the pearl in the other poem? Maybe I can find some more clues looking deeper!
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Date: 8/31/2010 12:04:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today David. Love, Carol
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