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I close my eyes and silken thoughts flow through my mind, The time before time is opened, with all its glory and majesty. I bring you with me my beautiful queen, within a dream, To a time that is yet to come, or a time that is long since past. The time before time, a blueprint of life, of all that shall ever be. In this land of all tomorrows Love shall surely flow, A river of life ever running across silver cords of memory. My Golden queen, come join me within my Celtic Dream. Your dream is mine, M 'Lord. Your thoughts reach my heart. The river is swift and deep and I immersed in Love for you. Time has no place nor meaning in the heart of our dream, Past, present, or in all our tomorrows, we shall be together. Our silver cords of memory will never tarnish, my Celtic Lord. They tie our silken thoughts together, never to be torn apart. In any land, upon any sea, winds call out your name to me. Tis you I Love. No other will I ever join in our Celtic Dream. Meet me tonight before the great white veil between worlds, Where in our connected minds we ever meet each night. I want but to gently take your hand my queen and enter our Celtic World. There within the emerald green fields we shall join together in Love, In the valley of echoes our love's song shall sing forever, On the plateau of Arrach we shall look into our futures horizon. My beloved, come with me into our Celtic scene, Take my hand and we shall enter our Celtic Dream. Rays of waning sun bid farewell, and amethyst twilight appears. Eagerly, I listen for your footfall, for another night is nigh upon us. Beyond the veil we shall tryst in emerald grasses and lavender heather, Where enfolded in each others arms, we intimately whisper of adoration. Our words shall softly echo through valley and vale in perfect harmony, A song of sweet serenade until we've reached the mountain top. There, hand in hand, we shall gaze into a million new tomorrows, Knowing in each one, Love shall carry us deep into our Celtic Dream. In visions of harmony, this Celtic Dream was born. Thank you, Mike.

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Date: 8/10/2016 9:57:00 PM
wow, you two make such lovely poetry together. Hey, Lin, finally seeing this oldie but goodie that you did with Mike!! Awesome
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Date: 5/15/2016 8:30:00 PM
This is excellent, and romantic. Congrats to both authors on a remarkable write. ***7+** -G
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Date: 5/17/2016 1:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, G. You're very generous.
Date: 5/12/2016 6:28:00 PM
Added this jewel to my fav list even before writing this reply.. Truly an amazing write.. Congrats TO YOU BOTH on a well polished AND BRILLIANT GEM!!!A7
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Date: 5/12/2016 11:08:00 PM
Thank you, dear Robert.
Date: 5/8/2016 7:30:00 PM
Hi Lin, It is always a pleasure to sing with you. You make each write a joy to do. The writing comes so easily. Let the visions always be harmonious for us. Now we walk beyond the veil and it is as yet a mystery for us both. Let us bring the time before time to life and sing old songs of glory to life. Another wonderful write with you Lin. Enjoying this so much. This is a seven Lin. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 5/8/2016 7:49:00 PM
Your very kind, Mike. I truly appreciate your dream of the Highlands. There's a whole 'nuther world on the other side of the white veil.
Date: 5/8/2016 11:34:00 AM
Hello Lin!! A truly excellent co-authored write by you and Mike. (I also did a piece with Mike last year on the "Kingdom of Arrach.") This one is extraordinarily well-done and brings one directly into the world of this "Celtic Dream." A "7" -- and it's in my Book of FAVs for sure!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 5/8/2016 12:25:00 PM
Hi Gary ~ Thanks for reading and for your generous comments. I'll make the time today to read your write with Mike. I'm sure it'll be fantastic!

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