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Cellar Door

Cellar Door dare to hit the floor? and pour pour your thoughts your feelings your dreams your urges on the table turn it into something better transforming into a sky high firefly wandering about in bliss butterfly kisses die crumble and turn to ash ashes to ashes dust to dust who do you have left to trust?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/21/2008 11:45:00 AM
Wonderful phrasing and imagery... excellent title and construction. Your final six lines with the concluding rhyme are superb! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 10/20/2008 11:50:00 AM
I think we must simply choose wisely who we let in and who we don't.....but not everyone in our lives is going to leave us or betray our trust. Some people do love.....and want to love us....if we will let them love us. It's a hard lesson when you've been through the ashes....but, remember....how pure those things are that grow afterwards, forrests upon forrests have been planted in the fire---and we turn into something more deeper and meaningful. Regards, Sara
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