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Celestial Valentine

Dazzling sun proposed
    
Pale moon consented bride to be
     
Flickering stars blushed!

 

© Demetrios Trifiatis
  08 FEBRUARY 2015

naturevalentines dayhaiku

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Paul Callus

February 10, 2015 at 12:16 PM

What a lovely and romantic haiku, Demi!! Just perfect for Valentine's Day. #7 // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 10, 2015 at 2:43 PM

Your visit a joyful event dear, Paul! Thank you for commenting so generously!

M. L. Kiser

February 9, 2015 at 2:58 AM

Demetrios, that was adorable!

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 10, 2015 at 2:44 PM

Thank you my friend, M.L.Kiser!

Connie Marcum Wong

February 8, 2015 at 8:33 PM

Dear Demetrios, I spied the title of your poem and couldn't wait to read it. I thought it might be good, I was wrong...It is spectacular! I love it! 7

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 10, 2015 at 2:45 PM

What a lovely thing to say, dear Connie! Thank you so much for your warm visit and heartfelt comment!