Celestial Valentine

Dazzling sun proposed Pale moon consented bride to be Flickering stars blushed! © Demetrios Trifiatis 08 FEBRUARY 2015

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Paul Callus

Date: 2/10/2015 12:16:00 PM

What a lovely and romantic haiku, Demi!! Just perfect for Valentine's Day. #7 // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/10/2015 2:43:00 PM

Your visit a joyful event dear, Paul! Thank you for commenting so generously!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/9/2015 2:58:00 AM

Demetrios, that was adorable!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/10/2015 2:44:00 PM

Thank you my friend, M.L.Kiser!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/8/2015 8:33:00 PM

Dear Demetrios, I spied the title of your poem and couldn't wait to read it. I thought it might be good, I was wrong...It is spectacular! I love it! 7

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/10/2015 2:45:00 PM

What a lovely thing to say, dear Connie! Thank you so much for your warm visit and heartfelt comment!

Tim Smith

Date: 2/8/2015 7:18:00 AM

Love your haiku my friend...the sky will be a happy one tonight.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/8/2015 7:29:00 AM

I am certain it will be! A good indication would be the flickering stars! Ha-ha! Thank you so much my dear friend, Timotheos!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/8/2015 5:35:00 AM

This is a beauty, indeed. I love the celestial bodies...you have captured their beauty well my dear poet. Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/8/2015 7:12:00 AM

Thank you dear, Eileen. Your visits are always reasons to feel happy! Thank you!