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Celebratory Sigh

The lavender clouds, lowered, like a fluffy blanket on top the eaglets’ ledge. Its loblolly pine lingers on the palate of the tongue like a luscious lollipop. The nestling-siblings, downy light, slightly on edge - eagle-eyed leader seeks kill. A bald rivalry rides the snowy sledge, unshielded by the adults; harmony sleeps. The earthlings’ Hallelujah - wings climb, soar, a lavish flight - celebratory sigh. Sunlight’s vantage slights - the flourishing cradle unsettled by uprising; loss. The lovelorn will land its own fledglings, feeling only for the solo Caesar, hailing through the rainbow slide - the Salome quilt, nevertheless God’s will on earth, necessary suffering for a season - a sour lollipop; sloppy life. We glory at the eagle’s flight, flourishing wingspan, falling towards us. Stalwart, its talons’ prey; we pray unfailing strength and fly towards heaven. 6/28/2020 STRAND COMPLETELY NEW(2) any theme any form Poetry Contest *Long lines are divided into two lines

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Date: 7/2/2020 3:25:00 AM
Gorgeous. Exquisite. Well penned Kim. Well done. Win well deserved.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2020 7:29:00 AM
Thank you, Caren! I appreciate so!
Date: 7/1/2020 9:00:00 AM
This is an absolute delight to read Kim! A colorful, gorgeous painting you have created with your words. A fave for me. Congratulations on your win :) Keep writing and inspiring. Blessings and love
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/1/2020 5:55:00 PM
Thank you so much! I was reading about an eagle a loblolly pine and I just had to write! Blessings and love!
Date: 6/29/2020 8:39:00 PM
Prayer from paradise as a sunbathes the courageous few as summer heats, challenged participants will swim beyond my room with a view -- a wondrous composition, my friend Kim, and my compliments for your 1st Place achievement, Stay Safe! -- Aloha~@William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2020 8:46:00 PM
Thank you, William!
Date: 6/28/2020 5:12:00 PM
I will join you in praying for unfailing strength after reading your well penned poem its only fitting, love and prayers Kim, that is what will get us through this. xo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2020 5:13:00 PM
Amen!
Date: 6/28/2020 3:35:00 PM
Great imagery you created in this poem Kim--I see the scene as they soar in flight. All the best.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2020 3:37:00 PM
Thanks so much! <3
Date: 6/28/2020 3:10:00 PM
it seems the hunt is on....the survivor will be strong....but what is done is what's needed to survive....it is simply natural instinct just to stay alive....enjoyed it kim though i had to read it a couple of times....dont see too many bald eagles in ga....lol
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2020 3:11:00 PM
No but I’ve been to Alaska! Thanks so much, sweet poet!

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