Celebratory Sigh

The lavender clouds, lowered, like a fluffy blanket
                                    on top the eaglets’ ledge.

Its loblolly pine lingers on the palate of the tongue
                                          like a luscious lollipop.
 
The nestling-siblings, downy light, slightly on edge -
                                 eagle-eyed leader seeks kill.

A bald rivalry rides the snowy sledge, unshielded
                           by the adults; harmony sleeps.

The earthlings’ Hallelujah - wings climb,
               soar, a lavish flight - celebratory sigh.

Sunlight’s vantage slights - the flourishing cradle
                                unsettled by uprising; loss.

The lovelorn will land its own fledglings, feeling
                                  only for the solo Caesar,

hailing through the rainbow slide - the Salome quilt,
                                         nevertheless God’s will

on earth, necessary suffering for a season -
                       a sour lollipop;  sloppy life.

We glory at the eagle’s flight, flourishing wingspan,
                                               falling towards us.

Stalwart, its talons’ prey; we pray unfailing strength
                                         and fly towards heaven.


6/28/2020
STRAND COMPLETELY NEW(2) any theme any form Poetry Contest

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 3:25 AM
Gorgeous. Exquisite. Well penned Kim. Well done. Win well deserved.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 7:29 AM
Thank you, Caren! I appreciate so!
Mishra Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 9:00 AM
This is an absolute delight to read Kim! A colorful, gorgeous painting you have created with your words. A fave for me. Congratulations on your win :) Keep writing and inspiring. Blessings and love
Rodrigues Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 5:55 PM
Thank you so much! I was reading about an eagle a loblolly pine and I just had to write! Blessings and love!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 8:39 PM
Prayer from paradise as a sunbathes the courageous few as summer heats, challenged participants will swim beyond my room with a view -- a wondrous composition, my friend Kim, and my compliments for your 1st Place achievement, Stay Safe! -- Aloha~@William
Rodrigues Avatar
June 29, 2020 at 8:46 PM
Thank you, William!
Rose  Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 5:12 PM
I will join you in praying for unfailing strength after reading your well penned poem its only fitting, love and prayers Kim, that is what will get us through this. xo
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 5:13 PM
Amen!
Pandit Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 3:35 PM
Great imagery you created in this poem Kim--I see the scene as they soar in flight. All the best.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 3:37 PM
Thanks so much! <3
Boddie Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 3:10 PM
it seems the hunt is on....the survivor will be strong....but what is done is what's needed to survive....it is simply natural instinct just to stay alive....enjoyed it kim though i had to read it a couple of times....dont see too many bald eagles in ga....lol
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2020 at 3:11 PM
No but I’ve been to Alaska! Thanks so much, sweet poet!
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