Celebration

Vernal Equinox


The captive portals peep into the frozen wintry extravaganza
Embellished with snowy walks and blistering winds
A knock on the door to waken the sun to robe his bare nature
The eyes tired of spotless views and ears hunger for trills and tweets

The heavy footed spiritual journeys of deities and saints
Has come to a rest with resurrections and enlightenments
On the dawn of the vernal equinox, setting the balances right
The sun rides gleefully across the celestial equator

The ice cracks and melts in its own music, the dolphins dance to uplift our spirits
There is a pandemonium of freedom in the magical air with birds in free flight
The hidden hues and colours toss in the smiles of spring
Spring is a celebration with nature and love with the birth of zillions of  treasures


March 30, 2016
Contest : Celebration
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 4/6/2016 11:09:00 PM
Balveen, Congratulations on your "Celebration Win." LINDA
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/7/2016 4:39:00 AM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 4/4/2016 8:07:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Balveen. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/7/2016 4:40:00 AM
Thanks Sandra!
Date: 4/4/2016 11:07:00 AM
Hi Balveen, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Enjoyed your song for the contest. May your pen ever run gold. A seven my friend....Mike.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/4/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thanks Mike! Very flattering for the heart!
Date: 4/4/2016 8:55:00 AM
Balveen, I always feel your passion when you write! Keep up the good work because your works inspire a lot people to write too! I'm grateful I'm that I've met a poet who writes amazingly! :) - HANS
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/4/2016 11:10:00 AM
Thanks Hansteven!
Date: 4/4/2016 3:02:00 AM
Greetings Balveen. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/4/2016 8:11:00 AM
Thanks, Teddy!
Date: 4/4/2016 3:01:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this very awesome poem Balveen..
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/4/2016 8:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, Upma!
Date: 4/3/2016 12:15:00 PM
Nice imagery... Congratulations ...
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/3/2016 1:09:00 PM
Thanks Probir!
Date: 4/3/2016 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations, Balveen on your prize winning write. Peace my friend:)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/3/2016 1:10:00 PM
Thanks Daniel!
Date: 4/3/2016 8:04:00 AM
a lovely celebration of spring Balveen congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/3/2016 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Jan! I've as yet to see the results!
Date: 4/3/2016 6:45:00 AM
good imagery Balveen ty for entering congrats on placing hugs
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 4/3/2016 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Hamilton!
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