Celebration

Vernal Equinox


The captive portals peep into the frozen wintry extravaganza
Embellished with snowy walks and blistering winds
A knock on the door to waken the sun to robe his bare nature
The eyes tired of spotless views and ears hunger for trills and tweets

The heavy footed spiritual journeys of deities and saints
Has come to a rest with resurrections and enlightenments
On the dawn of the vernal equinox, setting the balances right
The sun rides gleefully across the celestial equator

The ice cracks and melts in its own music, the dolphins dance to uplift our spirits
There is a pandemonium of freedom in the magical air with birds in free flight
The hidden hues and colours toss in the smiles of spring
Spring is a celebration with nature and love with the birth of zillions of  treasures


March 30, 2016
Contest : Celebration
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A   Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Balveen, Congratulations on your "Celebration Win." LINDA
Cheema Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 4:39 AM
Thanks Linda!
Haight Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Lovely imagery, Balveen. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 4:40 AM
Thanks Sandra!
Raven Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 11:07 AM
Hi Balveen, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Enjoyed your song for the contest. May your pen ever run gold. A seven my friend....Mike.
Cheema Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Thanks Mike! Very flattering for the heart!
Selfa Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Balveen, I always feel your passion when you write! Keep up the good work because your works inspire a lot people to write too! I'm grateful I'm that I've met a poet who writes amazingly! :) - HANS
Cheema Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 11:10 AM
Thanks Hansteven!
Kimathi Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 3:02 AM
Greetings Balveen. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Cheema Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 8:11 AM
Thanks, Teddy!
A. Sharma Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 3:01 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this very awesome poem Balveen..
Cheema Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 8:11 AM
Thank you so much, Upma!
Gupta Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Nice imagery... Congratulations ...
Cheema Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 1:09 PM
Thanks Probir!
Turner Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 10:00 AM
Congratulations, Balveen on your prize winning write. Peace my friend:)
Cheema Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 1:10 PM
Thanks Daniel!
Allison Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 8:04 AM
a lovely celebration of spring Balveen congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Cheema Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 8:14 AM
Thanks Jan! I've as yet to see the results!
Hamilton Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 6:45 AM
good imagery Balveen ty for entering congrats on placing hugs
Cheema Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 7:55 AM
Thanks Hamilton!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace