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Celebration

Friends and family gather around Up and down the merry-go-round You laugh and play Next thing you know the day fades away. Time flies when you are having fun As you celebrate your success You play and laugh until the morning sun. Friends and family leave You feel kinda empty when they do All the fun you had goes away But they will come back another day.

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Anil Deo

Date: 5/9/2020 11:48:00 PM

Yes, Serenity, we must accept even the Ocean has ebb & flow. When tides go out ... the Ocean does not think its the end. So, I loved this poem, especially the hope in your last line. While we live, we MUST hope (I personally have Jesus). Dr. Deo

Serenity Gordon Odai
Date: 5/10/2020 8:54:00 PM

Thank you :)