Celebrating the Light

CELEBRATING THE LIGHT

Ten minutes and still it won’t change
Late for her birthday party again,
Just like last year
She celebrates forty two years young tomorrow 
The 24th of December 
Here I have driven halfway across the state 
And am again stopped by the same red light in town
Made good time between Albany and Erie
Then down to a crawl at the tracks
And dead stop at this light
My God, the sun’ll be up soon if we don’t get moving
Grey dawn sky parts to reveal even more clouds higher up in the sky
She’ll think I’ve forgotten
Ok  -  at last the red flashes to green and hey, up comes the sun too!
I remember she’d always say her birthday marked the end of the darkest day
She always joked she was born with  the  return of the light
Now slip into cruise control and we’ll be there in fifteen  minutes
She’ll think her old man’s losing it for sure
But still . . . . .  I can’t wait to see my youngest daughter again
She was always the light of my life
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Entered in Debbie Guzzi's Contest 	Celebrate the Light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 5:10 AM
Congratulations Sidney. Love, Carol
Merryman Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 8:05 PM
Nicely written, Sidney. Congrats on your win! Kim
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 7:48 PM
Wonderful. I love it, Sydney!! Maybe it's my favorite one! I like how she says she is the end of dark days. My Bday was Labor DAy(my bday fell on a MOnday that year, and always Labor Day is first MOnday of September) so I always felt that I was the ending of summer, which I don't like because I adore the summer!! Keep up with good poems like this one. Congratulations.
Johnson Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 5:26 PM
A lovely poem for your daughter. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Song Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 5:02 PM
Hi Sid..I love this write that is so up close and personal...I feel as tho u invited me to be a part of your life...extraordinary...I will wait for another one of these!! Happy Holidays and congrats on this win. Gwendolen
Guzzi Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 3:25 PM
I always love the coarse reality of your writes..like huge bits of kosher salt which I love..each line nicely salted! Wonderful writing Congrad's Light & Love
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