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Your vision is delicately illuming the edge of my mindfulness. A significant pondering in the lucidity of my spirit otherness. Leaving me with a grin in the corner of blissfulness. Had been enclosed by the heavenly palms of awes kindness. I was stuck in the previous foggy musings of loneliness. Showers ran against the early window shadowiness. Like blooming buds were spread to catch the lights noblesse. Like angels, our spirits are carried over the clouds of softness. 1St Place Contest Winner Written: August 22, 2021 Your Favorite Rhyme Poem in August 2021 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/4/2021 9:53:00 AM

WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a creative/beautiful~~story/write. "Love It" Have a blessed day/weekend...............

Constance La France

Date: 9/2/2021 3:27:00 PM

Lasaad, beautiful and congratulations on your win in my contest, great image ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2021 9:00:00 AM

This is lovely, Lasaad!

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/27/2021 9:17:00 AM

Thank you so much, Andrea.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/27/2021 5:25:00 AM

Your voice ceaselessly resonates throughout, Lasaad.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/27/2021 5:32:00 AM

Thanks you so much for your constant support dear Vijay. Blessings

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/26/2021 11:30:00 PM

I enjoyed the rhythm you have going here with the poetic observations..Delice

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/27/2021 5:33:00 AM

Thank you so much, Delice, I’m glad you enjoyed it and appreciate your comment. Be Blessed

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/26/2021 10:36:00 PM

You have a particular style and this is reflected in this wonderful monorhyme.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/27/2021 5:34:00 AM

Thank you so much for your great comment, Victor, it’s so appreciated. Blessings

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/26/2021 6:38:00 PM

I must say, how clever, Lasaad. You have your own very gifted style which always provokes me to meditating...and frequently to amusement. You do so well what I could never do!

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/26/2021 7:47:00 PM

Thank you so much, Milton, your comment was insightful and motivating, and it means a lot to me. When it comes to writing poetry, I believe each of us has a unique perspective and understanding. I'm impressed by your amazing poems, and while I'm not as good as you, we're working hard every day to get better!