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6th in Light up the Lanterne Contest (Sponsor: Nette Onclaud)

Judged: June 20th, 2025

Ceasefire

white flag shrieks across skies drenched with stale war -"peace!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Andresen Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 10:50 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful Lantern, Trina :) - hugs
Layne Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 11:52 AM
Thanks Anne-lise!
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 9:21 AM
Great images! Congrats
Layne Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 11:55 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Blessings ~ TL.
Agustin Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 6:04 AM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
Layne Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 11:55 AM
Appreciated Beata. War was never in God's plan for humanity.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 5:50 AM
drenched with stale war…interesting wording! Congrats!
Layne Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 11:57 AM
:) Thank you, Kim!
Jones Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 9:46 PM
Wow! Powerful message Trina! Congratulations on your win.
Layne Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 11:56 AM
I appreciate you taking the time to read it and share your feedback. Thank you!
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