Ceasefire

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6th in Light up the Lanterne Contest (Sponsor: Nette Onclaud)

Judged: June 20th, 2025

white
flag shrieks
across skies
drenched with stale war
-"peace!"

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/21/2025 10:50:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful Lantern, Trina :) - hugs

Trina Layne
Date: 6/21/2025 11:52:00 AM

Thanks Anne-lise!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2025 9:21:00 AM

Great images! Congrats

Trina Layne
Date: 6/21/2025 11:55:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Blessings ~ TL.

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/21/2025 6:04:00 AM

Congrats. Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.

Trina Layne
Date: 6/21/2025 11:55:00 AM

Appreciated Beata. War was never in God's plan for humanity.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/21/2025 5:50:00 AM

drenched with stale war…interesting wording! Congrats!

Trina Layne
Date: 6/21/2025 11:57:00 AM

:) Thank you, Kim!

Karen Jones

Date: 6/20/2025 9:46:00 PM

Wow! Powerful message Trina! Congratulations on your win.

Trina Layne
Date: 6/21/2025 11:56:00 AM

I appreciate you taking the time to read it and share your feedback. Thank you!