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Light up the Lanterne Contest

Sponsor Nette Onclaud

Date 6/17/25

peace breaks out hope it holds if not, more death there

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 6/21/2025 1:18:00 PM
We picked the same one, I enjoyed yours Oliver, congrats on a great win!
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/21/2025 1:39:00 PM
Thanks John. Appreciate the comments
Date: 6/21/2025 10:55:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful Lantern, Oliver :) - hugs
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/21/2025 12:38:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise
Date: 6/21/2025 6:00:00 AM
Congrats. Thanks for sharing this... God bless you. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest.
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/21/2025 12:39:00 PM
Thanks Beata. You are welcome for your placement in my contest God Bless
Date: 6/21/2025 5:42:00 AM
Congrats on 2nd place!
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/21/2025 5:44:00 AM
Thanks Kim
Date: 6/19/2025 2:19:00 PM
your poem addresses the need for a ceasefire given the current mid east conflict. A ceasefire leads to peace. Fingers crossed. Best wishes with the contest
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/19/2025 6:04:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments
Date: 6/19/2025 10:52:00 AM
Good one. Everyone is choosing ceasefire of other themes. I have yet to see one of fireworks yet . That was what I chose.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/21/2025 9:14:00 AM
Well I finally saw more who did fireworks.
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/19/2025 12:38:00 PM
I just read your Andrea. Perhaps you are the only one then. Thank you. I chose Ceasefire because of the Iran/Israeli and Ukraine/Russian wars.
Date: 6/18/2025 7:54:00 PM
More death with 'peace' too, I'm afraid. Can't see making peace with the Mullahs. They'll exploit the break to rearm, with Russia and N. Korea's help, and then all hell will break loose again... The Mullahs need to go, just as Hitler did. The Supreme Ayatollah will not take his own life, so we need to do that for him... My opinion, of course. P.S. By 'we,' I mean Israel. I am a citizen of both Israel and the USA. The Israeli in me does NOT want to see American personnel involved in this war. ~ gw
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/18/2025 9:32:00 PM
I agree with all you say Gershon. Thanks for reading

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