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Charlie consumed countless calories chomping Christmas cake chocolate cookies candies chewy caramels cherry cheesecake consequently Charlie complained of cavernous cavities and cramped constricting chino’s Charlie can’t control continuous Christmas chomping! Alliteration Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper 12/11/20

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/25/2020 3:08:00 PM

Stopping back by to say congrats on this winner. Way to go ..Congrats. Sara

John Watt

Date: 12/24/2020 9:48:00 PM

Well done, Jan! Charlie and I are going to have to learn to sew (to replace those missing buttons, lol) Congrats on your first place win! Hugs ~ John

Joseph May

Date: 12/23/2020 5:19:00 AM

Very nicely done Jan, Congrats on your win, Merry Christmas!

Joanna Feltham

Date: 12/23/2020 1:43:00 AM

I can't control Christmas chomping either. :-) congratulations on your winning placement.

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/22/2020 9:44:00 PM

Congrats! Cheering you with blest Christmas spirit, while sharing you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/22/2020 7:49:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your great win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/17/2020 10:10:00 AM

The age bulge, darn metabolism

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/15/2020 5:49:00 AM

Good one. I am having trouble controlling the desire to eat sweets. I have got to get on the fruit and off sugar. Thanks for dropping by my page. I got a chuckle out of your comments. Sara

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/13/2020 6:50:00 PM

Hello Jan … at Christmas time, out through the window goes diets, healthy foods, and sugar free drinks, before two months of reversing the result - thanks once more Jan - Lindsay

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/13/2020 4:46:00 PM

This is amazing! What a terrific poem. It just kept getting better and better and better and better.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/13/2020 12:52:00 PM

WoW! Jan, You did an outstanding job with the C’s. It has a nice flow and rhythm. Charlie has a sweet tooth out of this world! I found this write to be very enjoyable and entertaining. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/12/2020 10:24:00 PM

This was a fun and tasty read.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/12/2020 2:02:00 PM

- It does not matter ... we only live once ... enjoy everything that is unhealthy at Christmas ... he can buy clothes in larger numbers :) - Good luck in the contest, Jan :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/12/2020 11:47:00 AM

Absolutely delightful Jan! Like Charlie I am avoiding the scale until after Jan 1st. Looks like a winner to me! Best of luck in the contest!