Jan Allison Poet Alliteration

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Cease Continual Christmas Chomping Charlie

Charlie consumed countless calories
chomping Christmas cake
chocolate
cookies 
candies
chewy caramels
cherry cheesecake
consequently 
Charlie complained of
cavernous cavities
and cramped constricting chino’s
Charlie can’t control continuous Christmas chomping!

Alliteration Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Eve Roper

12/11/20

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Sara Kendrick December 25, 2020 at 3:08 PM Stopping back by to say congrats on this winner. Way to go ..Congrats. Sara

John Watt December 24, 2020 at 9:48 PM Well done, Jan! Charlie and I are going to have to learn to sew (to replace those missing buttons, lol) Congrats on your first place win! Hugs ~ John

Joseph May December 23, 2020 at 5:19 AM Very nicely done Jan, Congrats on your win, Merry Christmas!

Jo Chamberlain December 23, 2020 at 1:43 AM I can't control Christmas chomping either. :-) congratulations on your winning placement.

Beata Agustin December 22, 2020 at 9:44 PM Congrats! Cheering you with blest Christmas spirit, while sharing you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Eve Roper December 22, 2020 at 7:49 PM Jan, congratulations on your great win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve

Mark Koplin December 17, 2020 at 10:10 AM The age bulge, darn metabolism

Sara Kendrick December 15, 2020 at 5:49 AM Good one. I am having trouble controlling the desire to eat sweets. I have got to get on the fruit and off sugar. Thanks for dropping by my page. I got a chuckle out of your comments. Sara

Lindsay Laurie December 13, 2020 at 6:50 PM Hello Jan … at Christmas time, out through the window goes diets, healthy foods, and sugar free drinks, before two months of reversing the result - thanks once more Jan - Lindsay

Caren Krutsinger December 13, 2020 at 4:46 PM This is amazing! What a terrific poem. It just kept getting better and better and better and better.

Alexis Y. December 13, 2020 at 12:52 PM WoW! Jan, You did an outstanding job with the C’s. It has a nice flow and rhythm. Charlie has a sweet tooth out of this world! I found this write to be very enjoyable and entertaining. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Juliet Ligon December 12, 2020 at 10:24 PM This was a fun and tasty read.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 12, 2020 at 2:02 PM - It does not matter ... we only live once ... enjoy everything that is unhealthy at Christmas ... he can buy clothes in larger numbers :) - Good luck in the contest, Jan :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Kauffman December 12, 2020 at 11:47 AM Absolutely delightful Jan! Like Charlie I am avoiding the scale until after Jan 1st. Looks like a winner to me! Best of luck in the contest!

Regina Mcintosh December 12, 2020 at 4:26 AM Great writing, dear Jan. So adorable. Love it. God bless you

Tom Cunningham December 12, 2020 at 4:03 AM Brilliant alliteration Jan, many of us will be struggling with tight clothes in a few weeks lol. Tom

Jenna Logan December 12, 2020 at 2:48 AM Charlie's chomped far too many confectionaries. Corking cool lines of alliteration, Jan.

Victor Buhagiar December 11, 2020 at 10:47 PM Having a bit of diabetes I will have to desist from sweets. I lovely poem with alliteration. Best for a win. ~~ Jan Allison December 12, 2020 at 1:28 AM hubby still has the odd treat and his levels remain ok, hugs jan xx