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Cease Continual Christmas Chomping Charlie

Charlie consumed countless calories
chomping Christmas cake
chocolate
cookies 
candies
chewy caramels
cherry cheesecake
consequently 
Charlie complained of
cavernous cavities
and cramped constricting chino’s
Charlie can’t control continuous Christmas chomping!

Alliteration Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Eve Roper

12/11/20

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Sara Kendrick Date: 12/25/2020 3:08:00 PM Stopping back by to say congrats on this winner. Way to go ..Congrats. Sara Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 12/24/2020 9:48:00 PM Well done, Jan! Charlie and I are going to have to learn to sew (to replace those missing buttons, lol) Congrats on your first place win! Hugs ~ John Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 12/23/2020 5:19:00 AM Very nicely done Jan, Congrats on your win, Merry Christmas! Login to Reply

Jo Chamberlain Date: 12/23/2020 1:43:00 AM I can't control Christmas chomping either. :-) congratulations on your winning placement. Login to Reply

Beata Agustin Date: 12/22/2020 9:44:00 PM Congrats! Cheering you with blest Christmas spirit, while sharing you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 12/22/2020 7:49:00 PM Jan, congratulations on your great win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Mark Koplin Date: 12/17/2020 10:10:00 AM The age bulge, darn metabolism Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/15/2020 5:49:00 AM Good one. I am having trouble controlling the desire to eat sweets. I have got to get on the fruit and off sugar. Thanks for dropping by my page. I got a chuckle out of your comments. Sara Login to Reply

Lindsay Laurie Date: 12/13/2020 6:50:00 PM Hello Jan … at Christmas time, out through the window goes diets, healthy foods, and sugar free drinks, before two months of reversing the result - thanks once more Jan - Lindsay Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 12/13/2020 4:46:00 PM This is amazing! What a terrific poem. It just kept getting better and better and better and better. Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 12/13/2020 12:52:00 PM WoW! Jan, You did an outstanding job with the C’s. It has a nice flow and rhythm. Charlie has a sweet tooth out of this world! I found this write to be very enjoyable and entertaining. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Juliet Ligon Date: 12/12/2020 10:24:00 PM This was a fun and tasty read. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/12/2020 2:02:00 PM - It does not matter ... we only live once ... enjoy everything that is unhealthy at Christmas ... he can buy clothes in larger numbers :) - Good luck in the contest, Jan :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 12/12/2020 11:47:00 AM Absolutely delightful Jan! Like Charlie I am avoiding the scale until after Jan 1st. Looks like a winner to me! Best of luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 12/12/2020 4:26:00 AM Great writing, dear Jan. So adorable. Love it. God bless you Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 12/12/2020 4:03:00 AM Brilliant alliteration Jan, many of us will be struggling with tight clothes in a few weeks lol. Tom Login to Reply

Jenna Logan Date: 12/12/2020 2:48:00 AM Charlie's chomped far too many confectionaries. Corking cool lines of alliteration, Jan. Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 12/11/2020 10:47:00 PM Having a bit of diabetes I will have to desist from sweets. I lovely poem with alliteration. Best for a win. ~~ Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/12/2020 1:28:00 AM hubby still has the odd treat and his levels remain ok, hugs jan xx