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Cctv Extract

A fire in the kitchen? I smell of smoke in the hall. Somebody is very guiltily Washing down the wall. What’s left of the toaster’s Just a burnt plastic shell. Some time last night We almost had a mini hell. Thank the Lord for CCTV. A bit of a disturbing sight He’d come in a bit tipsy Just after midnight. Put the toaster on the hob Switched the wrong device on Seemed blithely unaware that The smoke alarm had gone. He’d sat drinking tea Supremely unaware Of the flames and smoke Swirling around his chair. A pajamaed figure appears Smoke alarm must have alerted Situation quickly sorted Potential emergency averted. White faced and anxious Sitting with his dad and me As we all sit and watch The Closed Circuit Tv. He’d been doing so well Getting back on track But, three steps forward And two steps back. Give credit where it’s due, Criticise where it’s earned, Put it down to experience, Just another lesson learned. Mending broken soldiers We all voluntarily chose Win or lose its a gamble Last night it was close.

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Date: 7/30/2023 2:40:00 PM
you've told this tale very powerfully, terry...
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Terry Ireland
Date: 8/4/2023 4:44:00 AM
Thanks ilene
Date: 7/30/2023 7:15:00 AM
One day at a time. Admired your poem Terry. Fire alarms sure are life savers. I guess the CCTV was a necessity in the circumstances. Must be doubly hard for vets to get on top of excess drinking. Your poem an eye opener. Best wishes.
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Terry Ireland
Date: 7/30/2023 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Wen, this is a success story. 3 years on hes now rehoused and with the help of his parents now has full custodh of his kids. Upto now he’s dry and drug free. Still under the eyes of social services, but doing well, and working full time. Makes it all worth while.

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