Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Free verse

Caves

Caves





truth as tiny drops of water
hangs onto roofs,
waiting to nurture thoughts
creeping on dark floors,
Strange mind caves...
till flash of bright sunlight 
traverses through,
for negativity to vanish 
and sets dormant ideas aglow,
Strange mind caves ...




Written August 5th, 2016
For contest "Caves" 
Judged on Aug 7th, 2016
Awarded N/A

Now entered for contest "Take the dagger from my heart please"
Sponsor- Broken wings

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Daniel Turner September 6, 2016 at 8:15 AM I'm sorry I missed this one. This is a marvelous write. I think my brain isn't getting enough sun. Sorry I missed your poem, Doc. Nice to read you again. I enjoy your poetry.

Andrea Dietrich August 6, 2016 at 9:21 PM You did a really nice job interpreting the theme, Dr.Upma. Very nice indeed.

Paul Callus August 6, 2016 at 3:34 PM I love your creative take on this cave theme, Upma. Fortunately a positive beam of bright light finds its way into your 'cave'! gl in the contest:) Regards // paul

Wendy Rycroft August 5, 2016 at 5:01 PM Well written great poem xx

Cheryl Hoffman August 5, 2016 at 8:43 AM Love this clever write for the contest Dr. Sharma!:) G/L in it!:) Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 5, 2016 at 10:43 AM Thnx for ur kind words n wishes dear Cheryl