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Cave Crazy

He’s a thief who steals in large measure all he spies and wishes to treasure, but thought-darkness pokes his pleasure and he cannot gloat at his chosen leisure. Sleek and fast, he sees, wants and grabs any and all worthy possessions to be had. He has been chased, but he is feline-fast and sure footed when fleeing with a catch. For years the law has pursued his identity, gathered clues they can’t piece with ease or use to guide them effectively. He knows because he is Captain of Police. He needs splendors, he can’t help himself. He excites obtaining and touching wealth that he has stolen from someone else while fooling associates with his stealth. In time, he was tortured by his own charade. His need to touch hidden plunder every day increased the rash visits to his secret cave where his priceless spoils caressed his name. Gems called him master of the deceiving game and glowed bright with want for his acclaim. Slowly, twisted riches stole his mind, once sane, and developed a mentally felt blockade that trapped him forever inside his ornate cave. August 5, 2016

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Date: 3/26/2020 8:52:00 PM
Wow CayCay, I was wondering where you were going with this. Greed never ends well. Congratulations on your HM! xxoo
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Date: 8/8/2016 8:49:00 PM
A wonderful tale you've woven. It sounds as if it could be real.
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Date: 8/7/2016 1:58:00 PM
Great poem well written xxxxxxx
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Date: 8/6/2016 9:17:00 PM
my goodness, what an imaginative take on the theme, Caycay. Loved the way that one line reads: twisted riches stole his mind!! I was at first thinking it was Ali Baba in the secret cave, but a police instead . I think both you and I watch too many thriller shows on tv!!!
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Date: 8/6/2016 3:00:00 PM
I like your unique take on this cave theme, CayCay! You relate a story well, while the reader waits for more. Pity the master has to become a victim and prisoner of his own 'success'! Warm regards // paul
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Date: 8/6/2016 10:56:00 AM
Hi CayCay, another wonderful write, I have to admit, this made me think of the "Pink Panther" :) You have weaved a fine tale! :)
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Date: 8/5/2016 1:12:00 PM
ohh, a unique interpretation of the theme, cay... love how this ended!..huggs
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Date: 8/5/2016 9:17:00 AM
Great take on the contest! Shoud do well - Jesse
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