Cave Crazy

He’s a thief who steals in large measure
all he spies and wishes to treasure,
but thought-darkness pokes his pleasure
and he cannot gloat at his chosen leisure.

Sleek and fast, he sees, wants and grabs
any and all worthy possessions to be had.
He has been chased, but he is feline-fast
and sure footed when fleeing with a catch.

For years the law has pursued his identity,
gathered clues they can’t piece with ease
or use to guide them effectively.
He knows because he is Captain of Police.

He needs splendors, he can’t help himself.
He excites obtaining and touching wealth
that he has stolen from someone else
while fooling associates with his stealth.

In time, he was tortured by his own charade.
His need to touch hidden plunder every day
increased the rash visits to his secret cave
where his priceless spoils caressed his name.
Gems called him master of the deceiving game
and glowed bright with want for his acclaim.
Slowly, twisted riches stole his mind, once sane,
and developed a mentally felt blockade
that trapped him forever inside his ornate cave.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 8:52 PM
Wow CayCay, I was wondering where you were going with this. Greed never ends well. Congratulations on your HM! xxoo
Inman Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 8:49 PM
A wonderful tale you've woven. It sounds as if it could be real.
Rycroft Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 1:58 PM
Great poem well written xxxxxxx
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 9:17 PM
my goodness, what an imaginative take on the theme, Caycay. Loved the way that one line reads: twisted riches stole his mind!! I was at first thinking it was Ali Baba in the secret cave, but a police instead . I think both you and I watch too many thriller shows on tv!!!
Callus Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 3:00 PM
I like your unique take on this cave theme, CayCay! You relate a story well, while the reader waits for more. Pity the master has to become a victim and prisoner of his own 'success'! Warm regards // paul
Vaso Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 10:56 AM
Hi CayCay, another wonderful write, I have to admit, this made me think of the "Pink Panther" :) You have weaved a fine tale! :)
Onclaud Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 1:12 PM
ohh, a unique interpretation of the theme, cay... love how this ended!..huggs
Day Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 9:17 AM
Great take on the contest! Shoud do well - Jesse
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