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Cautionary Tale

Ditsy blonde mother of Red Riding Hood Sent her little girl alone to the wood… Once upon a present time That would be a heinous crime, Mom and grandma for neglect would be sued. February 25, 2022 Syllables count: 10 and 7

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Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/26/2022 11:16:00 AM

Enjoyed, but with cameras everywhere today, who would dare attack a child? Apparently any number of males in Hawai'i whose lawyer will submit a "Not Guilty" plea! Aloha!

Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/26/2022 11:28:00 AM

You are right as always, Rico, these days someone is somewhere watching! :) Aloha!

Gary Radice

Date: 2/26/2022 10:36:00 AM

Agreed..I'll add that if it happened today here in the UK no doubt the Royal Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Animals (RSPCA) would be up in arms over the slaying of the wolf by the lumberjack. :) Cheers - Gary

Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/26/2022 11:26:00 AM

Gary, HILARIOUS, I dare you to write on it and into the contest! I would be ok if it beats Red Riding Hood:) Let's propose another column COMMENT OF THE DAY! :) M.

Valerie Staton

Date: 2/26/2022 4:47:00 AM

Most definitely!! Your witty poem made me smile this morning. Thanks for writing this humorous poem.

Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/26/2022 4:57:00 AM

Thank you Valerie, smile is what it aimed for :) Have a nice day! M.

Deb M

Date: 2/25/2022 8:46:00 PM

So very true Margarita! Really cute Limerick. Debx

Jeff Kyser

Date: 2/25/2022 2:33:00 PM

No kidding, we were laughing about the things we did as kids, unsupervised, out from school out until dinner time, with parents only vaguely aware of where we were. Times have changed! Good one!

Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/25/2022 3:31:00 PM

Vaguely they were :)