Caution : Nra Possibility

Walking through the woods early in the day...

Haven’t seen a single soul passing my way...

All set to hunt as, I bought the latest gear....

On this the first hunting day of the year.....

It isn’t too cold but there’s a bit of snow...

So footprints will tell me where to go...

I can track by smell....

And I’ve been told pray tell....

That Man is getting smarter every single year..

Which means a lot... to my friends in here...

But now here’s the twist of this little ditty...

I’ve never lived or been to the city....

But trust me.. cause when I’m done..

And this is all in fun...by the end of Fall....

I’ll have a gorgeous blonde six footer ... a hanging on MY wall....
  
*** Just a thought...NRA = Natural Roaming Animal....
       or Nasty Reindeer Association.......hmmmm

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Date: 11/23/2013 3:33:00 AM
I like the "Natural Roaming Animal" idea to cover the field wider than merely reindeer. I read your and Jon's exchange and would like to comment. I'm sorry to butt in, guys. Your poetry is of a high caliber, KJ. The only way to get comments is to comment to others' poetry. There are some seriously good poets on the site and everybody is eager to help. I'm just a soupmail away if you need help or encouragement. Good luck, my friend. :-)
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Kj Force
Date: 11/23/2013 3:47:00 AM
delysia...thank you for visiting and the compliment on my writing..Everything I write comes from life, which backs up the truck and dumps 24-7..I have always reciprocated comments on others writes, I feel that is very important...as we need to support each other. Thanks for the encouragement..by the way I write for many different sites, hope you will check me out.
Date: 11/12/2013 11:42:00 PM
Love these ambiguous poems.
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Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 11/13/2013 8:57:00 PM
It takes time
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Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 11/13/2013 8:56:00 PM
I have. It takes to get a following of poets that are drawn to ones poetry. I'm sending you soup mail.
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Kj Force
Date: 11/13/2013 1:04:00 PM
thanks Jon...glad you enjoy them..however...I see by stats that many read, but very few comments..have you experienced this ? If they don't like them I would like to know either way...any suggestions ?
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