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Causeway of Hope

Neptune grant me leave
To build a causeway
Across your waters
A barrier reef
To connect two souls

Thor's hammer strong
Will smite these rocks
No mountain chain
Will I endure

Until I
Hold you close
And can kiss

The tears
From your

Cheeks

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/24/2008 7:08:00 PM
Hi Nigel, lovely write as usual. I've been gone for a day or so and have to catch up..I did start to read your latest blog and responses.Terrific. Please don't worry about the -sea- and I reference, response. As the say down under "no worries".. Anxious to get back into the swing with you all. BG
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Date: 11/24/2008 5:57:00 PM
Lovely to read, and interesting unusual form, ....I love the theme of the mystical romance, Nigel! Very original! Nicely done, as are all your works! I enjoy reading what you write! :) ~ Carrie
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