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Awarded:  Certificate of poetry excellance 

From:  Poetry Soup International poetry contest.

.                                                     Beneath a blanket of earth
                                                     With a pillow made of stone
                                                       Her child eternally sleeps
                                                                    
                                                                   ~~~

.                                                     While at the foot of his bed
                                                           She stands alone
                                               And weeps! And weeps! And weeps!


.                                                  Written:  November 20th, 2009
                                                   

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/9/2014 7:04:00 PM
just stopping by to read your poem I have faved...You are going DIRECTLY to my fav pet list too which I can't BELIEVE I haven't done already...
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Date: 4/14/2011 6:43:00 PM
heartbreaking and wonderful, Elaine!!
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Date: 2/24/2011 8:45:00 AM
It is a heart wrenching poem, Congrat on the poems win in the last contest. -Mohammad
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Date: 9/26/2010 6:49:00 PM
so so moving...congrats on the big win!
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Date: 9/15/2010 9:30:00 PM
How sad and unfortunately how true. Sniff sniff. --Susan
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Date: 7/27/2010 5:39:00 AM
AWESOME CONGRATS LAINIE ON YOUR BIG WIN! BRILLIANT AND SO WELL DESERVED! love, shar xoxo
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Date: 7/22/2010 7:29:00 AM
Congrats, Lainie, on this fine piece being selected in the international competition. Love, Dave
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Date: 7/22/2010 6:04:00 AM
This takes my breath away. Congrats on having this poem featured, great poem. Rhonda Hero
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Date: 7/22/2010 12:32:00 AM
Congratulations...beautiful...simply beautiful!
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Date: 7/21/2010 1:34:00 AM
Heartbreaking and beautiful, Elaine and congratulations on your big win...our children are supposed to outlive us, not the other way around...that's where the true tragedy lies...this goes to my favs list - Tim
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Date: 7/20/2010 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in the soup contest.
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Date: 7/20/2010 12:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Charles
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Date: 7/19/2010 9:10:00 AM
very moving images, Elaine, congrats on your success! you deserve it! jimbo
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Date: 7/19/2010 6:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the PoetrySoup Contest Lainie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2010 6:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Lainie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 8:13:00 PM
This heart wrenching poem speaks with such emotion!! Congratulations, Elaine, on this wonderful winning entry!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:55:00 PM
Congrats Lainie on your big win in the Poetry Soup Contest... enjoy a wonderful victory today.. with luv..
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:19:00 PM
Elaine, I had to look back to see if this is one I had already faved or not. I think I fav so many of your poems and that is because I just adore your style! And here I go again.... Congratualations. so glad to see this one here. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/18/2010 1:51:00 PM
Congratulations Elaine!! Such an honor and such a beautiful write!!! Love Jeralynn
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Date: 7/18/2010 11:29:00 AM
My congratulations Elaine, on this fantastic write and the win! Goes to my favs. today! Somehow I missed this!! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:18:00 AM
Dear Elaine - CONGRATULATIONS on your BIG WIN in the PSoup International Poetry Contest. This poem was so excellent - I knew your name would be in the winners circle! You're a talented and gifted writer. Wishing you an abundance of love and happiness. Peace always, John
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:15:00 AM
Many congrats on your wonderful feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 7/18/2010 12:22:00 AM
Elaine, this poem is so very moving. Excellent! Congratulations on it being featured.
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Date: 6/3/2010 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Lainie. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2010 8:58:00 AM
Congrats Elaine on both your entries making it to the first round competition in the Poetry Soup contest... way to go my friend.. good luck.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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