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Caught You Slipping


It seems like you're losing your touch
Others might even see it,
and wouldn't think much

But I know better,
better than most
I saw your hand trembling
holding the knife,
when you were spreading jam on your toast

That's bad, real bad for you
And it sure ain't good for me
I'm the target when the curtain rises,
it's me who risks getting a fatal injury

You're a knife thrower,
you've been the best for a long time
You've been a top carnival attraction
Everywhere we go,
you bring out the long lines

But I caught you slipping,
a slight hesitation yesterday
When you got my life in your hands,
that's not something where I can
just look the other way

If something is wrong with your nerves,
it's gonna make me start losing my nerve
It's me out there staring death in the eye,
why don't you put yourself in my shoes, go give it a try
Let me be the one letting those knives fly,
yeah, how does it feel seeing death whizzing by
I don't think today is a good day for me to die

You're a knife thrower,
you've been the best for a very long time
But seeing that small tremor
has really been laying heavy on my mind

I caught you slipping,
now I'm afraid to perform for the next show
Don't want it to be the last time I close my eyes
when you let the next knife go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/15/2016 6:50:00 AM
i HAVE FOUND THAT EVEN PUTTING MY LIFE IN MY OWN HANDS HAS BEEN A DANGEROUS THING(MY LIFE STORY REVEALS MANY TIMES OVER). Putting it in another person's hands tis not for me... You have a most creative mind! Bravo.. A7
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Date: 11/12/2016 6:18:00 PM
I agree with Rick! As soon as I spot the tremble; I'm boarding the next jumbo!:) (Or puddle jumper even!!) Heavy, quivery poem Freddie! :)
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Date: 11/12/2016 7:01:00 AM
Intense one, showing fear, worry and anticipation. Well done.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/12/2016 10:11:00 AM
Ty Heidi for the kind words. Love and joy to you, dear.
Date: 11/12/2016 7:01:00 AM
Mate, I wouldn't trust her! Haha, I'd be on the first plane out of there! And where do you buy your golden pens, my friend?
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/12/2016 10:14:00 AM
Now, now Rick. When you put your life in another's hands, you gotta trust 'em, right. Ha ha ha. I get my pens at the late-night Sandman store. It's open during sleepy time hours. Love and peace to you, my Aussie friend.

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