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I was helping a friend in the parking lot when I felt a tap on my butt!

Was it the wind that had been loosed? On my still bum, he’d come to roost. I’d been poked unaware. I turn around and stare. By a cicada, I’ve been goosed. 5/24/2018

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Date: 7/3/2018 1:55:00 AM
G'day Kim … I hope for your sake the noisy little didn't try and serenade you - thank you Kim - Lindsay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2018 5:41:00 AM
LOL! Love it! Thanks, Lindsay for the laugh!
Date: 5/25/2018 6:43:00 AM
Love love love it, my dear Kim!!! Not your lucky day!!! Lovesies, Happy Jack XOX
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/25/2018 7:01:00 AM
Thanks, Happy Jack! Hugs...Kim
Date: 5/24/2018 7:11:00 AM
Those sneaky cicadas! Gotta watch out for them Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2018 7:31:00 AM
For sure...lol!
Date: 5/24/2018 6:41:00 AM
Oh my Kim! You did create an interesting and entertaining poem with this :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2018 7:31:00 AM
Thanks, Heidi!
Date: 5/24/2018 5:45:00 AM
haha, sadly not your lucky day Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2018 6:06:00 AM
A poet forms a poem out of such luck. LOL

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