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Caught In the Sun

I'm caught in the sun
Shining its rays onto me
Breathing in salt air
Taking in the blue green sea
Footprints left upon the sand

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Andrea Dietrich

July 27, 2013 at 9:02 AM

this is so nice. Can't believe I never did see it yet. lovely scene depicted.

Connie Gildersleeve

July 28, 2013 at 5:31 PM

Andrea thank you for your visit and lovely comment. I haven't written any new poems lately. My muse is down in the dumps. Warm Smiles, Connie

Isaiah Zerbst

February 2, 2013 at 11:21 AM

What a pleasant scene. So descriptive and appealing to the senses. I think I forgot what sunshine is.

Connie Gildersleeve

February 3, 2013 at 2:53 PM

It's snowing big flakes adding to the already white covered ground, gray skies, no sun. Winter begone and spring bring in the sun. Thanks for stopping my and for you lovely comment. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

January 27, 2013 at 6:51 PM

I love the walk... pleasant... and warm... wishing to enjoy a real image like this soon,, summer comes a bit to quick here in Texas.. always~PD

Connie Gildersleeve

January 28, 2013 at 6:55 AM

Lucky. I'm in Michigan, warmth, not until June/July for me. Winter usually in Florida, but had surgery Jan 8th and another will have first part of May so I'm staying in the very cooooold weather. Thanks for stopping by. Smiles, Connie

Eileen Manassian

January 5, 2013 at 12:21 PM

Oh! This takes me to beauty days spent on the beaches of Cyprus! :) Thanks for capturing the magic so well! Also...thanks for the post.

Eileen Manassian

January 5, 2013 at 12:22 PM

oooopssss....typo! Beautiful days...silly me!

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 3, 2013 at 6:03 AM

Very refreshing and youthful! Adore it! Thank you for your comment. Hugs!

Connie Gildersleeve

January 3, 2013 at 7:45 AM

Thank you Demetrios for your comment. The sun, sand and sea's salt air I'll miss this year. I must stay back in my cold home state I fear. Burrrrrr to cold., Warm Smiles Connie