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Caught In the Sun

I'm caught in the sun Shining its rays onto me Breathing in salt air Taking in the blue green sea Footprints left upon the sand

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2013 9:02:00 AM

this is so nice. Can't believe I never did see it yet. lovely scene depicted.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 7/28/2013 5:31:00 PM

Andrea thank you for your visit and lovely comment. I haven't written any new poems lately. My muse is down in the dumps. Warm Smiles, Connie

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 2/2/2013 11:21:00 AM

What a pleasant scene. So descriptive and appealing to the senses. I think I forgot what sunshine is.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/3/2013 2:53:00 PM

It's snowing big flakes adding to the already white covered ground, gray skies, no sun. Winter begone and spring bring in the sun. Thanks for stopping my and for you lovely comment. Warm Smiles, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2013 6:51:00 PM

I love the walk... pleasant... and warm... wishing to enjoy a real image like this soon,, summer comes a bit to quick here in Texas.. always~PD

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/28/2013 6:55:00 AM

Lucky. I'm in Michigan, warmth, not until June/July for me. Winter usually in Florida, but had surgery Jan 8th and another will have first part of May so I'm staying in the very cooooold weather. Thanks for stopping by. Smiles, Connie

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/5/2013 12:21:00 PM

Oh! This takes me to beauty days spent on the beaches of Cyprus! :) Thanks for capturing the magic so well! Also...thanks for the post.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/5/2013 12:22:00 PM

oooopssss....typo! Beautiful days...silly me!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/3/2013 6:03:00 AM

Very refreshing and youthful! Adore it! Thank you for your comment. Hugs!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/3/2013 7:45:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios for your comment. The sun, sand and sea's salt air I'll miss this year. I must stay back in my cold home state I fear. Burrrrrr to cold., Warm Smiles Connie

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/1/2013 7:56:00 PM

I love your Tanka, Connie...it will do well in the contest, I'm sure! A beauty. Love, Annalise

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/2/2013 2:01:00 PM

Thank you for your comment Annalise. I wish I were leaving footprints on the sand. It's so cold here in Michigan. Warm Smiles, Connie