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Caught In the Sun

I feel his heart race
His warm breath rustling my hair
My mind tells me, ‘run’! 
Then lips find mine, so supple!
Too late! We're caught in the sun!
~*~

Copyright © Audrey Haick | Year Posted 2012

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Jon Gutmacher Date: 11/16/2019 7:53:00 PM Ha! loved it. I'll have to admit it's right on point with some romantic experiences of the past. Great job. Login to Reply

Ebrahim Sharifat Date: 3/20/2013 6:45:00 AM nice image Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 12/30/2012 8:10:00 AM That sun must be so nice and warm. Enjoyed, Happy New Year. Love, daver Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 12/29/2012 3:00:00 PM this is amazing, Annalise, have a happy New Year... Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 12/29/2012 8:34:00 AM I like it! Annalise! Jimbo Login to Reply

Jl Sadberry Date: 12/28/2012 8:33:00 AM *.* Stepping from the train as arriving unto a new town and gazing quietly about. Hello, beautiful Annalise. This is a very wonderful poem in pictures of love. 'Caught in the sun;' I love that line. No other place that I would ather be and also, your lovely heart's visit was quite nice and I appreciate its warmth very much. Beautiful painting fom a beautiful girl! Have a blessed as glorious day and happy holidays. Love always, Jasper *.* Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/28/2012 12:01:00 AM an intense visual .. very dramatic Annalise and good luck luv .. thankxx for kind words and prayers during my health ordeal .. means so much .. wishes for a blessed NY Login to Reply

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/27/2012 10:57:00 PM The sun gives life. Just watch out that you don't get overexposed. You wouldn't want to get burned. Enjoyed your poem with its nuances. Login to Reply

Toquyen Harrell Date: 12/27/2012 10:16:00 PM Great poem. Cute! Hope you had a wonderful Christmas, Annalise. Wishing you an incredible, full of excitement New year!! Love ya, Toquyen Login to Reply

Deb Wilson Date: 12/27/2012 7:50:00 PM so sensual and lovely too Annalise! Love,Deb Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 12/27/2012 6:53:00 PM Good twist at the end here!Lovely tanka Annalise. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/27/2012 5:16:00 PM So romantic..Enjoyed reading your passionate work..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always so uplifting..Sara Login to Reply

Erich Goller Date: 12/27/2012 4:35:00 PM that's a very lovely Tanka poem with an romantic touch,Thanks for sharing it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich Happy New Year! Login to Reply