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Caught In the Sun

I feel his heart race His warm breath rustling my hair My mind tells me, ‘run’! Then lips find mine, so supple! Too late! We're caught in the sun! ~*~

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Jon Gutmacher

Date: 11/16/2019 7:53:00 PM

Ha! loved it. I'll have to admit it's right on point with some romantic experiences of the past. Great job.

Ebrahim Sharifat

Date: 3/20/2013 6:45:00 AM

nice image

Daver Austin

Date: 12/30/2012 8:10:00 AM

That sun must be so nice and warm. Enjoyed, Happy New Year. Love, daver

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/29/2012 3:00:00 PM

this is amazing, Annalise, have a happy New Year...

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/29/2012 8:34:00 AM

I like it! Annalise! Jimbo

Jl Sadberry

Date: 12/28/2012 8:33:00 AM

*.* Stepping from the train as arriving unto a new town and gazing quietly about. Hello, beautiful Annalise. This is a very wonderful poem in pictures of love. 'Caught in the sun;' I love that line. No other place that I would ather be and also, your lovely heart's visit was quite nice and I appreciate its warmth very much. Beautiful painting fom a beautiful girl! Have a blessed as glorious day and happy holidays. Love always, Jasper *.*

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/28/2012 12:01:00 AM

an intense visual .. very dramatic Annalise and good luck luv .. thankxx for kind words and prayers during my health ordeal .. means so much .. wishes for a blessed NY