Caught In the Sun

On the beach,as  sun glazes with pleasure,
Gentle touch on my back makes me feel glee,
Then came darkness with storm of great measure,
Legs move ; water rises; This baffles me ,
as my date becomes the late by a tree.



CONTEST:"A CATCH-PHASE DAZZLER" Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 7:59 PM
Except for the last line, I really did like this one, Olusequn. Thanks for supporting my contest!
Horne Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 12:50 PM
lovely write - congrats : )
Horsman Avatar
December 26, 2012 at 4:17 AM
enjoyed this olusegun.. lovely little poem...
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