Caught In the Rain

At the same spot where we first met,
I stand here thinking of you, love.
I'm caught in the horrible rain.
All of the good times fly by fast.
My memories are slipping by.
And now i see that time does fly.
I'm still standing but soak and wet.
Tears run down my face with the rain.

I am still waiting on you.
Even though you will not come,
Because of the words spoken
That ended our friendship.
Now i turn cold with the rain.
Waiting to see your sweet smile.
I am still waiting on you.

Waiting to see your face.
But the dark rain hides it.
Tears spring themselves downward.
Man! do i love you so.
But will you ever come
After what I have said?

Hours have passed by.
Cabs have come and gone.
Still I wait on you.
In the dark, sad rain.
Hours have passed by.

Where are you, love?
I'm still waiting...
Have you forgot?
I'm abandoned 

There you are.
And with an
Umbrella.

Cover me
From the

Rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 10/22/2009 10:34:00 AM
Hosea, it has been some time since you posted. Nice to see you and your awesome writing here today. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/21/2009 2:44:00 PM
Love stories should have happy endings. I glad yours does. Keep writing. Sara
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