Caught In the Black Rain

She's caught in the black rain, emotions are swimming in darkness, as the
 acid rain impairs her vision; within the depth her soul she's unable to find goodness.

The falling black rain has her mind in a state of confusion, murder is no longer
 an ill illusion, actions has drawn it's fatal conclusion.

Upon her the black rain fell bringing misery with pain, living life in vain, constantly
 seeing loss with no gain, and her mental health is far from being sane.

Few have already seen the devastating effects of falling black rain, it's aftermath
 makes the sanest go insane, and those who survive the storm their lives will
  never go back to being simple nor plain.

Falling black rain is a storm formed from mental pain, financial strain, loss with
 no gain, and living life in vain.

Though, in my theory of goodness lies this conclusion," Things that we see as 
 being favorable unto living life is nothing more than our ill illusions," and there-
   fore it's causing us an in-depth state of confusion.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 7/9/2016 1:12:00 AM
Margaret, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/12/2012 8:08:00 AM
Long time ...no written, but I like this "old" one alot Margaret. Well written dear poet. - Sending you a hallo from Norway and me Anne-Lise
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Date: 11/13/2010 4:07:00 AM
Thank you Margaret for your kind words ! Your write here is though provoking...I wonder who truly is sane in these last days ! much love, james
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Date: 5/28/2010 10:47:00 AM
This is brilliant. I love it, and am adding it to my favorites. ~Rain ps. please do me the honor and comment on my poem The Sounds Of A Storm
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Date: 7/9/2008 7:49:00 PM
This poem is outstanding and very well stated.
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