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Caught In the Act



Got my hand caught in the cookie jar,
mother’s ears didn’t wander too far
Here comes the wooden stare ... 
then hot bottom fanned air
Double trouble, here comes father’s car

childhoodhumormetaphorparentslimerick

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Billy Anthony

Date: 5/20/2024 9:32:00 AM

LOL! Freddie this limerick was amazing it brought back some memories to my brother and me, and we enjoyed it. we both remember those days

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/15/2017 8:56:00 AM

Lol! Freddie, I really enjoyed this limerick. It brought some memories as well. Great job:-) Alexis

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 12/11/2017 7:32:00 AM

Lol. I remember those days. Cute Limerick.

Silent One

Date: 12/10/2017 5:17:00 PM

Great limerick my brother

Debbie Duncan

Date: 12/10/2017 12:02:00 PM

Ver nice. I remember having to get my own switch from the tree :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/10/2017 10:12:00 AM

Ha ha, cute one.

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 12/10/2017 7:54:00 AM

Whew I betcha you had trouble sitting down for awhile lol!;) Great limerick Freddie!~Che :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/10/2017 7:15:00 AM

Double trouble you are... Lol! This is funny and good, I sure did enjoy :) hugs and smiles and loves :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/10/2017 1:45:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Unfamiliar Flower

Date: 12/9/2017 4:48:00 PM

Very relatable! just love it! short and amazing!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/9/2017 1:32:00 PM

Uh oh!!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/9/2017 11:38:00 AM

Double trouble it is! Everyone can relate to this.. well written, Freddie!

James Swartz

Date: 12/9/2017 11:01:00 AM

Hmmm. Now I wonder what you were really caught with? Mystery is part of the charm though. Great poem from a memory you and your backside will never forget.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/9/2017 9:54:00 AM

Ah, little grasshoppers. Cookie is the allusion ... me not tell what I was actually caught doing. Lol! Trust me, my parents hot rod that foolishness out of me. Appreciate the cool comments by everyone. Love and smiles always to all.