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Caught In the Act



Got my hand caught in the cookie jar,
mother’s ears didn’t wander too far
Here comes the wooden stare ... 
then hot bottom fanned air
Double trouble, here comes father’s car

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Billy Anthony

May 20, 2024 at 9:32 AM

LOL! Freddie this limerick was amazing it brought back some memories to my brother and me, and we enjoyed it. we both remember those days

Alexis Y.

December 15, 2017 at 8:56 AM

Lol! Freddie, I really enjoyed this limerick. It brought some memories as well. Great job:-) Alexis

Rhoda Tripp

December 11, 2017 at 7:32 AM

Lol. I remember those days. Cute Limerick.

Silent One

December 10, 2017 at 5:17 PM

Great limerick my brother

Debbie Duncan

December 10, 2017 at 12:02 PM

Ver nice. I remember having to get my own switch from the tree :)

Richard Lamoureux

December 10, 2017 at 10:12 AM

Ha ha, cute one.

Cheryl Hoffman

December 10, 2017 at 7:54 AM

Whew I betcha you had trouble sitting down for awhile lol!;) Great limerick Freddie!~Che :)

Akkina Downing

December 10, 2017 at 7:15 AM

Double trouble you are... Lol! This is funny and good, I sure did enjoy :) hugs and smiles and loves :)

Ravi Sathasivam

December 10, 2017 at 1:45 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Unfamiliar Flower

December 9, 2017 at 4:48 PM

Very relatable! just love it! short and amazing!!

Kim Rodrigues

December 9, 2017 at 1:32 PM

Uh oh!!

Vijay Pandit

December 9, 2017 at 11:38 AM

Double trouble it is! Everyone can relate to this.. well written, Freddie!

James Swartz

December 9, 2017 at 11:01 AM

Hmmm. Now I wonder what you were really caught with? Mystery is part of the charm though. Great poem from a memory you and your backside will never forget.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

December 9, 2017 at 9:54 AM

Ah, little grasshoppers. Cookie is the allusion ... me not tell what I was actually caught doing. Lol! Trust me, my parents hot rod that foolishness out of me. Appreciate the cool comments by everyone. Love and smiles always to all.