Caught In A Web, They Cannot Dis-enmesh



You, with your everlasting sorrow mom 
deserve nifty hands and healing ways of
You,  who always loved with the truest calm 
now sit bereft of food and needs God's glove 

You, the womb that bore consecrated Zen 
sit still with your emptiness praying that  
You, will once more be as fertile as a hen  
fresh as the ocean in God's special vat  

You, who have given us bounty with grace  
have birthed a sapling, a seed, and the bud 
You, Mother Earth whos honest clean faced
has always provided with substance and sud

They, who have loitered and taken your fresh,  
are caught in a web, they cannot dis-enmesh.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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DiMino Avatar
November 28, 2024 at 8:47 AM
Indeed, we need to take better care of our planet -- our spirits are entwined. Great read!
Rose  Avatar
November 28, 2024 at 1:08 PM
We are definitely entwined so it should always matter how we treat each other and our beloved planet Joe !
Rodgers Avatar
November 28, 2024 at 8:20 AM
Dear Rose, I loved your Sonnet reflection on the complexities of love, sacrifice, and the burdens we carry. Rose, your wonderful verses beautifully encapsulates the nurturing spirit of motherhood and the profound impact it has on our lives. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Rose  Avatar
November 28, 2024 at 1:08 PM
thank you for your kind visit and generous comment Daniel, a special greeting to you !
Buhagiar Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 10:37 AM
I seem to have lost my touch, especially with rhyme. A brilliant sonnet with great flow and perfect structure.
Rose  Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 6:52 PM
Nah, you still go it Victor, maybe the muse is just taking a break, your still one of the best here. :)
Rolland Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 7:08 AM
beautiful, we owe a lot to our mother, nice reading
Rose  Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 6:52 PM
Yes we do dear Yann thanks for leaving a comment
One Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 11:30 AM
Lovely sonnet my friend..
Rose  Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 7:27 PM
Thank you for stopping by my poetry Silent, One :)
Narain Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 9:52 AM
Nice uplifting poem.
Rose  Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 7:27 PM
Thank you for your comment dear Jay
Empress Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 4:18 AM
Dear rose, as always your empathetic soul, feels not just for human beings but all that is around holding this world and life together, and all that this earth too endures you feel and can be evident as i read this sonnet woven with excellent rhymes and flow, soulfully meaningful and powerful poem this is, speaks volumes! Pleasure always reading your kind words. Sending you light today and always
Rose  Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 7:27 PM
Thank you for reading dear Ink, your comments are so valuable to my soul :)
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