Caught In a Swell

Beware the distant storm, you tiny ripple
Ignore the tempest and fettered thought
Blame naked shells and open cockles 
For only they to the sand this anger brought

Red tattered flags, fluttering warning signs
Aside a tower vacantly minding the shore
Trembling hand raises weakly above the tide
Ripped by fearful woes once more ignored

As rage and fury lash at Blackrock beach
Witness to awakened hearts in fearsome squall
What more than hope for our second wind to gust
For only on the line we do raze our wall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 12, 2016 at 3:44 PM
Very well written and beautifully descriptive. I could almost hear this storm in my mind as I read this today.
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October 12, 2016 at 8:55 PM
Thanks. Although if only almost i need to work harder
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