Caught In a Dream:

Caught up in the moment of a deep dream,
Myself drifting further than it would seem,
Although unaware of one's own true self,
I leave behind all my worries of health.

As orchestras sound and play in the mind,
Taken away on this journey in time,
While violins and great horns burst out free,
Captured the act of spiritual glee.

Quintessentially verbalized of course,
Within the dream world, there is no remorse,
No regrets, no shame, just a state of bliss,
In this realm, freedom to be as you wish.

You will be amazed at what you will find,
The dream world to me has always been kind.
                         /|\
(ten syllables per line)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lindley Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 8:45 PM
Excellent sonnet and quite a smooth flow to it. Definitely a solid 7..
Wolf Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Thanks Robert, I'm glad you liked this one, and thanks for the soup mail once again /|\
Onclaud Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 4:35 AM
ohh, the pleasure of dreaming so well crafted, rick... beautiful offering from you!..huggs
Wolf Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 6:21 AM
Thanks nette, I just finished reading your poem Autumn fire... And may I say again how I enjoyed it so! Good luck in the contest, not that you need it, your poem stands up for itself. Cheers /|\
Daniel Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 12:24 AM
Oh, that dream world!!! Well done, Rick:)
Wolf Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 12:43 AM
Thanks Jo /|\
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