Cats

Cats static, unlikely. They'd rather play in the big fish tank. It's the notion of prey in motion, fish.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/15/2024 3:26:00 PM

Very nice contrast using static and motion. This is a lot of fun to think about.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/18/2024 10:55:00 AM

Thank you Duke! :)

Bill Baker

Date: 12/4/2023 3:42:00 PM

Excellent form in this Ninette, my friend. Very clever poetry, Linda. Write On! Bill

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/6/2023 9:02:00 AM

Many thanks my friend! :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/3/2023 7:24:00 PM

Lol, I saw that, don't know where but it was funny--splash. Thanks, Linda. Aloha, William

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/6/2023 9:02:00 AM

LOL Glad you enjoyed it William. Thank you. :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/3/2023 8:01:00 AM

A fun/creative Ninette write. I had cats as a kid/no cats now here. Have a wonderful day..................

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/6/2023 9:00:00 AM

Thank you dear Paula. hugs! :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/2/2023 4:48:00 PM

a perfect Ninette that describes a cat's preoccupation with fish in a fish bowl or tank. Have a lovely evening, Sara

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/3/2023 6:05:00 AM

Thanks Sara. Have a blessed Sunday :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/2/2023 10:58:00 AM

A perfect depiction of a cat totally mesmerized by watching a fish bowl, Linda - definitely a picture of my childhood kitty! Thanks for the wonderful memory! Blessings!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/2/2023 11:42:00 AM

You are so welcome dear Sam. Thank you for reading and enjoying this snippet of time. I appreciate your comments. Have a great weekend hugs and blessings :)