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Cathexis

Chasing stars Aligned with brilliance Forging hearts In stormy signatures Rain falls as reverence Wetting the face of forgiveness Extinguishing the fire of this soul’s madness That drifts into the midnight hour Where darkness searches for light My blood flows red and alive Awaiting May 1, 2023 Pick a Title, Vol 36 Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 5/7/2023 7:56:00 PM
Lonna, your concise, powerful poem portrays extemes through personification. Janice
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/13/2023 12:57:00 PM
Thank you Janice. Hope all is well and happy with you. Lonna
Date: 5/1/2023 3:33:00 PM
How suspenseful and dramatic, love the lines 'forging hearts/in stormy signatures' and 'where darkness searches for light' - feels like glimpsing the moon through the rain~
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 5/3/2023 8:55:00 AM
Hi Michelle, Thank you for your wonderful comment. I love your idea as well! Lonna

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