Cathedral

CATHEDRAL in sanctuary sunlight strikes the panes blood red huge g minor chord paris – notre dame its big bell shatters silence ghost – quasimodo marvelous stone pile cologne cathedral inside universe enclosed old priest asking alms cologne cathedral inside blessed – face of god

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Joe Maverick

Date: 3/17/2013 1:39:00 AM

Liked the granduer and austere fell you have injected into this one Daver; I have been having computer problems so thats why have not been on for a bit.."

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2013 2:20:00 PM

HI, Daver, thanks for your comments today. yes, I had thought of that "ribald" comment for my pieces poem and decided not to add it. haha

Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/10/2013 9:10:00 AM

Nice series of haiku. Thanks for your comments and support.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2013 3:02:00 PM

I remember this PFT post. VERY nice, Daver!

James Peranteau

Date: 3/7/2013 12:12:00 AM

A truly consuming write dear poet ! A real pleasure to read my friend ! Have a great week sir ! Much love, james

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/6/2013 3:30:00 PM

'sunlight strikes the panes blood red' and 'universe enclosed'...wow, Daver... can't be done any better than that...sure would like to see that place - Tim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/6/2013 8:39:00 AM

Reads like a beautiful place..Enjoyed reading your work today...Sara