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Cathartic Eclipse

Cathartic Eclipse I witnessed the death of the universe… Tumbling, crushing, spinning in the maddening chaos of the spiral Time! Eternity… ceased to exist, Time… was no more, my soul ripped asunder the stars… show no more! Pleading internally I succumb my farewells, emptied my concavities, ashes of solitude reminded me of quixotic moments dismissed involuntarily you were oblivious to my presence gazing emptily a brimming space, surreality became my twisted fate and no transition left for immortality! My world is hushed And I crave for volumes of light in this glaring darkness of hope succumbing throes of cacophonous silence cocooned in webs of deceit awaiting the promised resurrection. In these nights of forgetfulness my poetry still bleeds inside me in this realm there is an aeonic distance between my Soul… and your Heart!...

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Date: 1/1/2025 5:30:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 10:00:00 AM
ANCA. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:56:00 PM
hello Anca, enjoying your poem once again..Hope to see you post this year. 2016..Love SKAT
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Date: 10/13/2015 4:58:00 PM
Anca, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Anca Mihaela Bruma
Date: 10/14/2015 1:01:00 AM
Thank you dear Linda, much appreciated!
Date: 10/13/2015 12:32:00 PM
Anca, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Anca Mihaela Bruma
Date: 10/13/2015 12:43:00 PM
Dear Skat thank you for such warm welcoming! And the kind wishes. What would you like to know about me?

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