Cathartic Eclipse

Cathartic Eclipse 

I witnessed the death of the universe…
Tumbling, crushing, spinning
in the maddening chaos
of the spiral Time!

Eternity… ceased to exist,
Time… was no more,
my soul ripped asunder
the stars… show no more!

Pleading internally
I succumb my farewells,
emptied my concavities,
ashes of solitude reminded me
of quixotic moments
dismissed involuntarily 

you were oblivious to my presence
gazing emptily a brimming space,
surreality became my twisted fate
and no transition left for immortality!


My world is hushed
And I crave for volumes of light
in this glaring darkness of hope
succumbing throes 
of cacophonous silence 
cocooned in webs of deceit
awaiting the promised resurrection.

In these nights of forgetfulness
my poetry still bleeds inside me
in this realm there is an aeonic distance
between my Soul… and your Heart!...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 5:30 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 10:00 AM
ANCA. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 12, 2016 at 2:56 PM
hello Anca, enjoying your poem once again..Hope to see you post this year. 2016..Love SKAT
A   Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 4:58 PM
Anca, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Bruma Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 1:01 AM
Thank you dear Linda, much appreciated!
A  Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 12:32 PM
Anca, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Bruma Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 12:43 PM
Dear Skat thank you for such warm welcoming! And the kind wishes. What would you like to know about me?
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